Winter's Reflection

Winter keeps him warming by the fire Where the crystal knob 'pon door Reflects a roaring fire
Sponsor: Rick Parise Contest:"I'll Have One Kimo Please"
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February 17, 2013 at 6:04 AM
Beautiful Kimo by you Sara.Congrats on your win.
Veetil Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:46 AM
congratulations Sara....
Roberts Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:53 PM
just beautiful Sara, congrats on your win in the contest
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February 15, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Sara.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:26 PM
I can't believe I ever missed this one. It is truly beautiful, Sara. Congrats on the Hm. (love how you got the crystal into it!)
Merryman Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:08 PM
Nice work, Sara! Congrats on your HM with this lovely kimo! Love, Kim
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:26 PM
Congrats on your win. I loved this Kimo. Warm Smiles, Connie
Zerbst Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Eloquent piece. Such a cozy and happy picture.
Sivey Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 11:24 AM
I really liked how you put this write together my friend, you have masterfully portrayed the winter via a warm fire, very brilliant! You have written a terrific poem here Sara, what a enlightening piece, Great Work!!
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February 7, 2013 at 9:35 AM
Sara, lovely write. :) It warms the heart. Thanks for your lovely post. I am well, enjoying the time with my daughter, father and step-mum. :) Hugs to you, my dear. God bless and all the best with this write!
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February 7, 2013 at 9:29 AM
Sara your descriptions of your words are amazing. So visual, so much so I can see the crystal nob reflects the roaring fire in my mind's eye. Warm Smiles, Connie
Susan Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 7:09 AM
nice image! best wishes in the contest :)
Horsman Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 7:09 AM
what a wonder this is, a kimo middle line frozen,, the knob on the door, wow brilliant,, good luck with this...
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 5:52 AM
........ however, spring warms even better Sara. (I miss the spring now) - Very well written, lovely - wish you luck in the contest! - Have a beautiful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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