Winter's On Her Way

Autumn leaves begin to mold; as songbirds flee from the cold. For Winter is on Her way; clad in white, and feeling bold. As night starts to eclipse day, children go inside to play. And when winter snows are nigh, geese no longer wish to stay. Fledgling birds must learn to fly, before snowflakes dust the sky. And thus escape Winter's freeze, flying south as the leaves die. Cold winds scatter fallen leaves; strewn around the barren trees. And rustic browns edged in gold thrash about with each brisk breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Lovely poem, Emile. "And when all the flowers die geese no longer wish to stay." And who can blame them? love your closing with "And thus escape Winter’s freeze flying south till She blows by."
Pinet Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.
Makama Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 12:22 PM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
Pinet Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Thank you Funom, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 6:53 AM
Emile your poetry captivated my eyes!!~olive
Pinet Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Olive, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Onclaud Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 6:52 PM
stunning artpiece from your golden quill, emile... delighted!.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 8:37 AM
Thanks so much Nette, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Nance Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 5:46 PM
Wonderfully done!!! much enjoyed!
Pinet Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Thanks Casarah, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 2:14 PM
exceptional Emile rhyme is superb and your poem thrills love it hugs 7 and fav
Pinet Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 6:26 PM
Thanks Shadow, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile
Y. Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Emile, you have painted a beautiful picture with words. Great imagery! I saw seasons change to the next. Leaves falling, birds flying wow! Beautiful form as well. I'm glad I stopped by to view a without a doubt 7.:)Alexis
Pinet Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 6:27 PM
Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your words of encouragement and support. Emile
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 11:48 AM
what amazing imagery Emile and a delightful form - I may give it a try one day:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Pinet Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 6:27 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your friendly visits of support. Emile
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