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Autumn leaves begin to mold; as songbirds flee from the cold. For Winter is on Her way; clad in white and feeling bold. When night starts to eclipse day, children go inside to play. And when all the flowers die, geese no longer wish to stay. Fledgling birds must learn to fly before snowflakes dust the sky. And thus escape Winter's freeze, flying south till She blows by. Cold winds scatter fallen leaves; strewn around the barren trees. And rustic browns edged in gold thrash about with each brisk breeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/8/2018 8:30:00 AM
Lovely poem, Emile. "And when all the flowers die geese no longer wish to stay." And who can blame them? love your closing with "And thus escape Winter’s freeze flying south till She blows by."
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.
Date: 7/22/2015 12:22:00 PM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Date: 7/22/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thank you Funom, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 7/17/2015 6:53:00 AM
Emile your poetry captivated my eyes!!~olive
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Date: 7/17/2015 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Olive, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/16/2015 6:52:00 PM
stunning artpiece from your golden quill, emile... delighted!.. huggs
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Date: 7/17/2015 8:37:00 AM
Thanks so much Nette, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Date: 7/16/2015 5:46:00 PM
Wonderfully done!!! much enjoyed!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2015 6:25:00 PM
Thanks Casarah, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/16/2015 2:14:00 PM
exceptional Emile rhyme is superb and your poem thrills love it hugs 7 and fav
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2015 6:26:00 PM
Thanks Shadow, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile
Date: 7/16/2015 12:18:00 PM
Emile, you have painted a beautiful picture with words. Great imagery! I saw seasons change to the next. Leaves falling, birds flying wow! Beautiful form as well. I'm glad I stopped by to view a without a doubt 7.:)Alexis
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2015 6:27:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your words of encouragement and support. Emile
Date: 7/16/2015 11:48:00 AM
what amazing imagery Emile and a delightful form - I may give it a try one day:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2015 6:27:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your friendly visits of support. Emile

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