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Winters Moon

Twas the end of summer soon Whence shadows fall in afternoon A beauty joyed by one and all Also winter spring and fall Summer brings a summer moon Rainy days and cloudy gloom Sometimes just the bluest sky So perfect it will make you cry Spring has showers that cleanse the soul It brings forth life be still and grow Born again sometimes a first Natures nurse from winters curse Falls,falling colors,falling leaves Fleeting life from mother's tree's Beauty's struggle fading soon With winter comes a winters doom Winter's bitter and winter's cold It's only wonder is the snow. Yet unlike summers grayish moon Winters moon is baby blue.....

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Charlie Smith

Date: 7/28/2016 6:29:00 AM

Well done Anthony, congratulations...

Anthony August
Date: 7/28/2016 1:24:00 PM

Thank you

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/28/2016 6:22:00 AM

Greetings Anthony. Congrats for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)

Anthony August
Date: 7/28/2016 1:23:00 PM

Thank you

Anthony Mark

Date: 7/28/2016 3:19:00 AM

Bit of a rhyming mouth full, maybe broken into stanza's would lesson the feeling of " being under a toppling poem" , it's nice to read, but I felt myself predicting the next rhyme word....perhaps over run the meter here and there to force the readers attention....al I all well done Ian

Anthony August
Date: 7/28/2016 1:23:00 PM

Thank you for your advise

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/27/2016 5:27:00 PM

Congratulations on a great rhyme and win.

Anthony August
Date: 7/27/2016 8:05:00 PM

Thank You

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2016 3:40:00 PM

beautiful imagery and rhyme - many congrats on your win Anthony:-) hugs jan xx

Anthony August
Date: 7/27/2016 4:19:00 PM

thank you

Tim Smith

Date: 7/27/2016 2:26:00 PM

Terrific rhyme and pace to this win...congrats

Anthony August
Date: 7/27/2016 4:20:00 PM

thank you

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/27/2016 2:26:00 PM

Wow, Anthony, this is wonderful......so beautiful and brings emotion to the wonders of nature! I loved it!

Anthony August
Date: 7/27/2016 4:20:00 PM

thank you

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/27/2016 12:40:00 PM

Lovely string of words...the beloved snow and the baby blue moon! Congratulations, Anthony!

Anthony August
Date: 7/27/2016 4:21:00 PM

thank you

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2016 11:32:00 AM

Anthony, thank you for joining my contest. I was thrilled with the imagery, flow and rhymes. I enjoyed the colors in mother nature's eye.... Congratulations on the win. Enjoy my latest blog....Skat

Anthony August
Date: 7/27/2016 4:22:00 PM

your welcome