Sam Kauffman Poet Rhyme

Winter's Magic

Winter's Magic 1-8-24
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Winter’s Magic

Winter wizard casts cold spells with gusto
As torrents of snowstorms dance flamencos
Champagne confetti drifts in bits of snow
Clear technicolor snowflakes spin aglow
As winter winds enchanted spells now sow
Bright snowfall’s glitter – solstice nights light show
Meadows and boughs bewitched by snowy ghosts
Wear sparkling blankets for enchanted tableaus
Hypnotic flurries weave to and fro
In the trance of crystal ice chateaus
All the world wears an enchanted chapeau
Winter magic captured in a snow globe.

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Terry Miller January 23, 2024 at 7:26 AM Great mono-rhyme Sam, love the twist at the ens, congratulations Sam Kauffman January 23, 2024 at 10:28 AM Hi Terry! Thank you so much! This was such a fun and captivating theme. Winter, truly, can be so magical. Have always loved snow globes! Blessings of health and happiness to you!

Tania Kitchin January 15, 2024 at 6:27 AM Sam, a creative winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement! Sam Kauffman January 23, 2024 at 10:31 AM Hi Tania! Loved this theme. I have always been mesmerized by winter scenes, snowfall and the way snow can turn a dreary winter scene, or day, into a magical experience! Thank you for sponsoring this contest and for my placement. Blessings to you!

Kelly Deschler January 13, 2024 at 6:12 PM "Winter magic captured in a snow globe" and in this wonderful poem ... Excellent work, Sam! Sam Kauffman January 23, 2024 at 10:33 AM Hi Kelly! I so appreciate your delightful feedback! Thank you! Winter is such a singularly unique season made magic by snow and even rain! Hope you are well! Blessings of health, happiness and inspiration to you!

Janice Canerdy January 11, 2024 at 4:09 PM Sam, this is a very skillfully-composed, vividly descriptive, appealing poem. Especially great last line! Janice Sam Kauffman January 12, 2024 at 2:09 PM Hi Janice! Many thanks for your gracious feedback! Had fun looking up words for the mono-rhyme! I loved this theme and only at the end of writing the poem did the idea for the snow globe emerge! Gratitude and blessings to you! emerge.

Ink Empress January 10, 2024 at 5:12 AM “ winter magic captured in a snow globe” what a line to end this magical and fairytale like poem with, i love the lyrical cadence of your well crafted poem and various shades of colors youv sprinkled in such eloquence to enhance the beauty of winter for the readers to grasp: especially loved the lines “ Champagne confetti drifts in bits of snow Clear technicolor snowflakes spin aglow“ amazing! And soulful! So artistic! The last three lines your rhymes are so unique and beautiful! BOL! Love this Sam Kauffman January 12, 2024 at 2:14 PM Dearest Inky, your feedback is always so filled with deeply moving compliments! Thank you so much!! I love our shared love of color! It was so much fun to "craft" these words into the magic spell of winter as a storm leaves a fairyland of wonder! Thank you for sharing in my delight of the magic found in this season! Blessings and gratitude to you!!

Paige Hind January 9, 2024 at 1:33 PM Just beautiful, Sam. I loved your technicolor flakes spinning in your snow globe. Sam Kauffman January 11, 2024 at 11:41 AM Hi Paige! Had so much fun delighting in the magic of winter snowflakes and snowfall! Hope you are having a great new year! Blessings!

Valsa George January 9, 2024 at 3:16 AM Hi Sam, sorry I haven't visited your poems for long as I have been quite busy at the home front with my children and grand child at home. What a stunning winter scene you have painted. "Meadows and boughs bewitched by snowy ghosts Wear sparkling blankets for enchanted tableaus Hypnotic flurries weave to and fro In the trance of crystal ice chateaus".... ! Winter is indeed a wizard who performs magic with gusto ! Awesome descriptions dear Sam. This cute little poem goes into my FAVE. Sam Kauffman January 23, 2024 at 11:12 AM Dearest Valsa, with a new grandchild and family at home, I know how insane things can be! That being said, any time we can visit is a treasure! Your fav is truly an honor. Had fun being enchanted by winter's magic show all over again as I remembered being totally mesmerized by watching snow fall then walking through a wonderland of fantastic scenery! Know you remain in my thoughts and prayers, dear friend! Blessings of health, happiness and, of course, inspiration to you and your family!!

Hiya Sharma January 8, 2024 at 7:05 PM Gosh, wowww what an enchanting poem this is, Sam! I feel like swinging in this soft and beautiful magic swirling in spells of the winter wizard.. Ah, such a gorgeous personification you've done here, winter really behaves like a wizard.. Stunning descriptions throughout with glowing alliterations and especially, I love your rhymes too, they are immensely elegant! So many lines I adore here "Champagne confetti drifts in bits of snow", "Wear sparkling blankets for enchanted tableaus" Truly amazing Sam Kauffman January 11, 2024 at 11:39 AM Happy New Year, Hiya! Thank you so much for your amazing reading of this poem and wonderful feedback! What an honor to be compared to "Frozen" - a truly magical story as magical as watching snow fall. Was delighted to know you picked up on the "fairytale" ambiance of this poem - the underlying wonder. I am so honored by your fav. Thank you! If we can see past the cold and barrenness of winter, there is magic in this season that transforms the world like no other season! Sending you blessings for the new year! Hiya Sharma January 8, 2024 at 7:06 PM You really nailed it, I agree! This reminded me of the Disney movie 'Frozen' as you've given your words a bewitching fairytale-like ambience.. Loved reading this.. Sending light and my best wishes ~ a FAV