Winters Hungry Dawn Haiku

winter’s hungry dawn starving for a bright, warm sun an orange falls, one Rhyming Haiku 5/7/5 12/7/2022

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Arlo Parker

Date: 12/7/2022 2:05:00 PM

California unique scene...thanks, Grecian Princess. ~;o)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/7/2022 4:21:00 PM

Prince Arlo, You are too nice! Thank you. Grecian Princess, Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 12/7/2022 1:11:00 PM

Very descriptive verse, Pangie! You should submit this for the contest! Bob

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/7/2022 4:20:00 PM

You are too nice! I do not participate in contests. I did two, in three years. I just don’t get a bang out of it. )))) yes, I am silly. There are master Haiku writers here. This is one, only one of my weakest areas. I get exasperated when most were trained in typing and call them “kus”. Then what do we call Senryus? Must be “yus?” I don’t blame this on poets. But on a technological age. We waltz and shine in our poems, but not in personal communication. There, writing is minimal? Why? Two sentences are a huge stain? Comments do not require a PHD,, or a dissertation. But a warmth in comments, is most welcome, Mistletoe merriment, Pangie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2022 10:54:00 AM

- a beautiful image in your haiku, Pangie :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/7/2022 11:07:00 AM

Hi Anne Nicole, thank you for telling me it pleases you. Mistletoe merriment, Pangie

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/7/2022 6:21:00 AM

Pangie , How beautiful and soothing . I love the visuals and the gift of warm sun ! Big hugs and all good wishes for a happy healthy holiday season . Susan :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/7/2022 11:05:00 AM

Hi, beautiful poet! It’s odd living in California. I do have an orange tree in the backyard))). Plenty cold, but not as in the Midwest. It’s always better to see Mr. Sol rolling bt. Yes, holiday is almost here. May yours be a joyful as the person, I know you to be. Mistletoe merriment, Pangie.