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Winter's Hostage

Petrified by snow, Captive limbs...shackled by ice: Prisoner of frost.

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Amy Green

Date: 3/23/2010 7:59:00 AM

Awesome Raul. Fortunately- this is now melting! Come on spring!

Skat A

Date: 2/17/2010 9:10:00 PM

YOU SOUND LIKE YOU ARE SURRRRROUNDED BY SNOW..A SNOWMAN IN YOUR HAIKU....I.T.

Date: 1/4/2010 11:42:00 AM

The vivid imagery forwards your thoughts in a powerful way. Fitting title. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/3/2010 9:15:00 PM

Prisoner of frost is a great line. Well done, my friend. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/3/2010 7:20:00 PM

Visual Haiku Raul.. we have these exact words of your poem in New Jersey tonight.. bitter cold winds and frigid temps making trees look petrified and frost covered.. enjoyed.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie

Robin Maughan

Date: 1/3/2010 7:17:00 PM

Very nice..shackled and Hostage.. awesome fit! Awesome Haiku! Hugs Always, Robin

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/3/2010 6:19:00 PM

a very good name for this Haiku, Raul.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2010 5:34:00 PM

Cold very cold winter Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowng. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2010 5:26:00 PM

Just wonderful. I've seen this sight and for me, it came out in triolet form! Andrea