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Winter's Hostage

Petrified by snow,
Captive limbs...shackled by ice:
Prisoner of frost.

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Amy Green

March 23, 2010 at 7:59 AM

Awesome Raul. Fortunately- this is now melting! Come on spring!

Skat A

February 17, 2010 at 9:10 PM

YOU SOUND LIKE YOU ARE SURRRRROUNDED BY SNOW..A SNOWMAN IN YOUR HAIKU....I.T.

January 4, 2010 at 11:42 AM

The vivid imagery forwards your thoughts in a powerful way. Fitting title. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

January 3, 2010 at 9:15 PM

Prisoner of frost is a great line. Well done, my friend. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 3, 2010 at 7:20 PM

Visual Haiku Raul.. we have these exact words of your poem in New Jersey tonight.. bitter cold winds and frigid temps making trees look petrified and frost covered.. enjoyed.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie