Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

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*Inspired by our first snowfall the other day.

Winter's Hello

In the early morning, winter says hello
Leaving a soft dusting of fallen snow
It lays on the colorful leaves around
Sprinkled white, to the mixture on the ground
In a snap of cold air and wind blowing through,
There is a merging of the old with the new
Taking steps on the sparkling surface of white,
Makes way for the colors, covered in the night
All peeking through winter’s hello, into sight
With a daybreak reminder, everything is alright

Heidi Sands

10/22/18

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Joanna Daniel October 25, 2018 at 8:46 AM Yes, everything is alright, nice little poem, Heidi:) Heidi Sands October 25, 2018 at 9:11 AM Thank you Jo. I appreciate your comments :)

Wren Rushing October 25, 2018 at 7:13 AM Beautifully written Heidi. I live in south Louisiana we don't get alot of snow. But when we do it's a big deal. Heidi Sands October 25, 2018 at 8:33 AM Thank you Wren :)

Quoth Theraven October 24, 2018 at 10:13 PM I used, to eat snow. I shoveled and slogged through it. And now I revel in memories of it,..in your sweet poem. -Richard Heidi Sands October 25, 2018 at 8:33 AM Thank you Richard :)

Winged Warrior October 24, 2018 at 12:36 AM (((VERY COOL)))!...love & light...^WW^ Heidi Sands October 24, 2018 at 7:33 AM Thank you WW! Love & Light to you too :)

Connie Marcum Wong October 23, 2018 at 3:43 PM First snow fall has an angelic feel to it Heidi. So does your lovely poem. I loved this winter crystal gem! : ) Heidi Sands October 23, 2018 at 3:44 PM Thank you Connie. I am happy you love this one :)

Chris Green October 23, 2018 at 1:52 PM This was gorgeous Heidi. The winter scene you paint with words is simply magical. Heidi Sands October 23, 2018 at 2:26 PM Thank you very much Chris. I am happy to hear that :)

Mike Gentile October 23, 2018 at 12:42 PM What a lovely image, peeking through!! I'm not quite ready for Winter's hello but ready or not, it's coming! A beautiful poem happy Tuesday xxoo Heidi Sands October 23, 2018 at 1:08 PM Thank you Mike. I am not ready either ...lol I appreciate your visit and support. Happy Tuesday :)

Vladislav Raven October 23, 2018 at 8:46 AM Hi Heidi, I am one of those fools who has a love of the winter, well, the snow really. This is a beautiful little gem Heidi. You had me right away with the title. I loved the content and Silent is right, it is getting colder. Soon be cold enough for snow. A beautiful little fave Heidi. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Heidi Sands October 23, 2018 at 9:58 AM The snow can be very pretty. Thank you for your kind comment and considering it a fave. :)

Silent One October 23, 2018 at 8:21 AM It is getting colder... we can see the changes around us.. unless you live in Australia or Brazil! Heidi Sands October 23, 2018 at 8:25 AM Yes, it is. Thank you SO :)

Joseph May October 22, 2018 at 7:53 PM Winter greets the waning days of Fall..Beautiful write Heidi.. Heidi Sands October 23, 2018 at 8:25 AM Yes, it sure does. Thank you Joseph :)

Frederic Parker October 22, 2018 at 6:16 PM times like that make me miss the North...well almost...sunny and 80 today Heidi Sands October 22, 2018 at 7:43 PM LOL Sunny and 80 sounds nice Frederic. Thank you for your visit :)

Vijay Pandit October 22, 2018 at 5:37 PM Lovely welcome to first snowfall..enjoyed reading your poem. Unusually cold here in Maryland as well. Heidi Sands October 22, 2018 at 5:44 PM Thank you Vijay. Yes, the cold seems to be arriving early, especially with all the color still here. And cold in Maryland too, wow! Stay warm :)

Tom Cunningham October 22, 2018 at 5:03 PM Brrr autumn now making it's exit, Our forcast for the weekend is a cold blast from the north with a chance of sleet. Lovely verse Heidi. Tom. Heidi Sands October 22, 2018 at 5:05 PM Yes, that's right Tom. Stay warm! Thank you for your visit and comment :)