Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Winter's First Breath

Crisp beauty of winter's first breath
filters setting free
crystal pierced emotion,
grab hold of me

Clouds held out inhibitions
night frosts left behind functionality
dainty the flowers,
lost in misery

Blankets soothe the sleeping
the canvas becomes pristine
images erupt euphoria,
as far as eyes can see

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Kelli White November 16, 2017 at 9:33 AM We in Massachussettes just started burning wood after our first frost. The imagery in this poem describes the flowers and frosts perfectly. Kelli

Sara Ella November 16, 2017 at 8:36 AM It is the perfect picture of winter <3

Connie Marcum Wong November 16, 2017 at 6:09 AM Your beautiful poem relates so well the emotional contrasts of winter. It is both beautiful but difficult to be in Tim : )

Arthur Vaso November 15, 2017 at 5:16 PM Very soothing beautiful poem!

Casarah Nance November 15, 2017 at 5:15 PM :) cozy up to a fire and enjoy the view, is it snowing there for you?

Heidi Sands November 15, 2017 at 3:38 PM Beautiful Tim. I enjoyed this. :)

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2017 at 3:23 PM what a beautiful image painted for Winter's breath, Tim. VERY nice.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2017 at 2:55 PM - A beautiful poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing November 15, 2017 at 2:37 PM Title alone is breathinking. Absolutely beautiful, Tim. Although I'm sad that my herbs are slowly dying, I am looking forward to some stayhome snowed in... Lol! I fave this poem... Higs and smiles

Jan Allison November 15, 2017 at 2:15 PM I was captivated by the title and the imagery is so so beautiful Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit November 15, 2017 at 2:05 PM Lovely imagery in this poem!

Lin Lane November 15, 2017 at 1:20 PM Your poem is about Winter's start and mine has it in it's last days. I like yours better ';-)