Get Your Premium Membership

Winter's First Breath

Crisp beauty of winter's first breath filters setting free crystal pierced emotion, grab hold of me Clouds held out inhibitions night frosts left behind functionality dainty the flowers, lost in misery Blankets soothe the sleeping the canvas becomes pristine images erupt euphoria, as far as eyes can see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/16/2017 9:33:00 AM
We in Massachussettes just started burning wood after our first frost. The imagery in this poem describes the flowers and frosts perfectly. Kelli
Login to Reply
Date: 11/16/2017 8:36:00 AM
It is the perfect picture of winter <3
Login to Reply
Date: 11/16/2017 6:09:00 AM
Your beautiful poem relates so well the emotional contrasts of winter. It is both beautiful but difficult to be in Tim : )
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2017 5:16:00 PM
Very soothing beautiful poem!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2017 5:15:00 PM
:) cozy up to a fire and enjoy the view, is it snowing there for you?
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2017 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful Tim. I enjoyed this. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2017 3:23:00 PM
what a beautiful image painted for Winter's breath, Tim. VERY nice.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2017 2:55:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2017 2:37:00 PM
Title alone is breathinking. Absolutely beautiful, Tim. Although I'm sad that my herbs are slowly dying, I am looking forward to some stayhome snowed in... Lol! I fave this poem... Higs and smiles
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2017 2:15:00 PM
I was captivated by the title and the imagery is so so beautiful Tim:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2017 2:05:00 PM
Lovely imagery in this poem!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2017 1:20:00 PM
Your poem is about Winter's start and mine has it in it's last days. I like yours better ';-)
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things