Winter's Final Gasp

Porcelain shroud slowly falls;
hapless Mother trapped inside.
For the next twelve weeks at least,
her time she’ll be forced to bide.

Returning from his exile,
Uncle Jack’s come out to play.
Across our world, it’s been said:
free to have his wicked way.

Undeterred, life struggles on;
endangered mammals slumber.
Safe, secure and snuggled down,
climate does not encumber.

Signs of season everywhere;
glassy ice and icy glass.
Crisp, consoling cracks ring out;
the crunch of frost-crusted grass.

Deep within the forest’s womb,
hidden seeds of life gestate.
Once this weather does improve,
eager to embrace their fate.

Newborn shoots raise sleepy heads;
late frost strikes a grievous blow.
Others will soon take their place,
bursting from the soil below.

Wisps of freezing fog linger;
this last vestige Jack did grasp.
But ‘tis futile, this foray;
Winter’s final, feeble, gasp.

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(C) John C Michaels, 5th March 2017

Submitted to Rob Carmick's "Screwed XVII" contest (judged 6th May 2017)
(3rd Place)

Originally submitted to the "Open Poetry Competition" sponsored by Charlotte Jade Puddifoot (5th March 2017)
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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Hello John Michael, I can not read your poems, tThe print ias too small. I had to presson the poem in order to read it. I thought I would let you know. I like this poem it will be my fav. /Darlene/
Haight Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Beautifully written, John. I enjoyed reading your poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. 7, Sandra
Michaels Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Thank you very much, Sandra. I'm glad you liked it. Regards, John.
Carmack Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 1:11 AM
John - congrats and thanks for participating in my contest.
Michaels Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 2:42 AM
Thank you so much for running your contest, which allowed my little poem a second shot and for my placement! I'm delighted that you liked it. Regards, John.
Daniel Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 9:26 AM
This is mindblowing poetry about changing seasons, John:) I love the fourth stanza:) a 7:)
Michaels Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 10:00 AM
I'm speechless. Such fantastic praise is massively appreciated! Good pick - stanza #4 is my favourite, too!! :) Thank you for your comments.
May Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Old Jack hangs on desperately but Spring has come to rule the day...Great write John
Michaels Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 10:40 AM
Thank you for your kind comments; glad you liked it!
Lindley Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 12:26 PM
TRULY EXCEPTIONAL POETRY. Skillfully written, with wondrous imagery and references to Nature and seasons. A clear fav...
Michaels Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:42 AM
Wow! Thanks for the amazing feedback, Robert. Greatly appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 2:33 PM
- A lovely poem, John - Best wishes in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:39 AM
Thank you for the kind comments. All the best!
Ricci Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 12:37 PM
Hello John. I'm very impressed with your level of talent and skill. This entry is very much poetry. It is well thought out and executed. Best of luck to you and this entry in the contest. Well done throughout.
Michaels Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 1:02 PM
Hi Lisa. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. Your kind remarks are much appreciated.
Gupta Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 5:15 AM
Beautiful description ... a pleasure to read ...
Michaels Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 5:22 AM
In at the ground floor - I only posted the poem 5 minutes ago!! Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments.
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