Winters End

snow white doe stalls in the headlight of days —
                                                golden chariot awakes

9/7/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rose  Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 3:53 PM
Its amazing how a one liner can bring about such visual stimulation. Thank you for sharing your poetic heart with me today.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Thank you, sweet Pixie!
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 5:34 PM
wow, Love that image!!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much!
Watt Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 11:30 PM
You can't see me, but I have that deer in the headlight look right now. Stunning monoku, deer friend... oops, I mean dear friend!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 3:11 AM
LOL! Thank you, John!
Wolf Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 2:24 PM
So poetic a monoku, Kim! Great imagery. Especially like that golden chariot. Kudos, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Thank you, my friend...I almost said dear friend, but tant didn’t seem right...lol <3
Ashley Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Oh, such breathtaking imagery, Kim. Inspiring bliss in the faith of better things to come. Your golden artistry never fails you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Thank you so much, dear lady!
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