Winters End

snow white doe stalls in the headlight of days — golden chariot awakes 9/7/2020

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/14/2020 3:53:00 PM

Its amazing how a one liner can bring about such visual stimulation. Thank you for sharing your poetic heart with me today.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2020 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Pixie!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2020 5:34:00 PM

wow, Love that image!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2020 7:03:00 PM

Thank you so much!

John Watt

Date: 9/7/2020 11:30:00 PM

You can't see me, but I have that deer in the headlight look right now. Stunning monoku, deer friend... oops, I mean dear friend!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2020 3:11:00 AM

LOL! Thank you, John!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/7/2020 2:24:00 PM

So poetic a monoku, Kim! Great imagery. Especially like that golden chariot. Kudos, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, my friend...I almost said dear friend, but tant didn’t seem right...lol <3

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/7/2020 9:00:00 AM

Oh, such breathtaking imagery, Kim. Inspiring bliss in the faith of better things to come. Your golden artistry never fails you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 2:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear lady!