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Winter's Dividends

White frozen mist 'pon trees' bare limbs Ice clings to leaveless branch Limbs bend beneath the weight of cold Fall to earth with a crunch Winter's beauty cast its own spell Snow glistens like diamonds 'Pon the stark silhouetted trees Rest snow for ice cream viands Written after reading Russell's Crystallized Snow

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 4:52:00 PM

Nicely composed. I could picture it succinctly with the imagery you used Sara.

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/15/2013 12:04:00 PM

Beautiful imagination depicted a nice picture. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl

Duncan Chappell

Date: 9/15/2013 4:49:00 AM

very nice indeed

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/13/2013 6:19:00 AM

HI Sara, Wonderful write in anticipation of oncoming winter.. Ken

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/13/2013 4:34:00 AM

Masterful writing, sparkling poetry! Is winter already there? Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2013 10:13:00 PM

way to be inspired. It's so neat when another writer does that to us.

Cindy Lu

Date: 9/12/2013 12:42:00 PM

Nice imagery use. Great poem today! Take good care Sara. Cindy aka Lucinda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/12/2013 8:33:00 AM

Welcome to the winter. Has winter in your area set in? Presently I am in India.enjoying monsoon i.e. rainy season

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/12/2013 6:24:00 AM

This is an incredible write my friend! It's nice to know that my poetry can influence other people's own poetry, that's awesome! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning! What a dynamite piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!