Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Winter's Dividends

White frozen mist 'pon trees' bare limbs
Ice clings to leaveless branch
Limbs bend beneath the weight of cold
Fall to earth with a crunch

Winter's beauty cast its own spell
Snow glistens like diamonds
'Pon the stark silhouetted trees 
Rest snow for ice cream viands


Written after reading Russell's 
Crystallized Snow

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Mustapha Mohammed September 15, 2013 at 4:52 PM Nicely composed. I could picture it succinctly with the imagery you used Sara.

Bl Devnath September 15, 2013 at 12:04 PM Beautiful imagination depicted a nice picture. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl

Duncan Chappell September 15, 2013 at 4:49 AM very nice indeed

Ken Carroll September 13, 2013 at 6:19 AM HI Sara, Wonderful write in anticipation of oncoming winter.. Ken

Demetrios Trifiatis September 13, 2013 at 4:34 AM Masterful writing, sparkling poetry! Is winter already there? Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2013 at 10:13 PM way to be inspired. It's so neat when another writer does that to us.

Cindy Lu September 12, 2013 at 12:42 PM Nice imagery use. Great poem today! Take good care Sara. Cindy aka Lucinda

Dr.Ram Mehta September 12, 2013 at 8:33 AM Welcome to the winter. Has winter in your area set in? Presently I am in India.enjoying monsoon i.e. rainy season

Russell Sivey September 12, 2013 at 6:24 AM This is an incredible write my friend! It's nice to know that my poetry can influence other people's own poetry, that's awesome! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning! What a dynamite piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!