Winter's Breath - Clouds Contest

bouncy pale locks 
fly little legs 
pump, soar the blue

winters tide trickles 
tear streaked temples
a game of peek-a-boo 

with an intangible daddy 
playing in the clouds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 7:23 PM
this is adorable and makes great use of word SOUND.
Dadhwal Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Loved the play of words in this poem. Beautiful.
Anglesey Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 2:40 PM
Very nice picture like describing a photograph :)
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