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winter's breath - clouds contest

bouncy pale locks fly little legs pump, soar the blue winters tide trickles tear streaked temples a game of peek-a-boo with an intangible daddy playing in the clouds

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Date: 8/23/2013 7:23:00 PM
this is adorable and makes great use of word SOUND.
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Date: 8/22/2013 7:42:00 AM
Loved the play of words in this poem. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/21/2013 2:40:00 PM
Very nice picture like describing a photograph :)
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