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Winter's Baton

sweetly birds whistle all summer long... whips winter's baton... magic's gone Not for contest

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Date: 6/21/2019 6:55:00 AM
It is amazing how fast summer and winter follow each other around the cycle. You have demonstrated this well in a few words.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 11:38:00 AM
TYSM for your generous evaluation of this haiku, Caren. :) gw
Date: 6/20/2019 10:02:00 PM
Nicely done, Greshon, around my trees they are always singing all year round.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/20/2019 10:12:00 PM
Really? Birds are mostly quiet in Chicago during the winter, esp. when it gets really cold... Enjoy! :) gw

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