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Winter's Adumbration

Shrouded penumbra
   Seconds shatter dawn's chilled gasp
        Moments remain mute

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Raul Moreno

December 28, 2008 at 5:57 PM

Great poem John, Masterful work you have penned here. Thanks for your comments. I hope you have a Happy and Safe New Year...Raul

Constance La France

December 24, 2008 at 4:04 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Winter Solstice contest and for you comment on my win with my poem Gliding.. Constance

Michael Jordan

December 23, 2008 at 8:38 PM

John - Congratulations on placing in Seashell’s contest – MERRY CHRISTMAS & God Bless, MJ

Kristin Reynolds

December 23, 2008 at 2:29 AM

Congrats John, on your well deserved win!!! you are always a winner! Love, Kristin

Brian Strand

December 23, 2008 at 1:53 AM

Congrats on your success in SI's solstice contest John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings

Nigel Fawcett

December 23, 2008 at 12:29 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved Win in seashell's lovely contest. Love, Nigel

Sharon Winter

December 22, 2008 at 7:05 PM

Congratulations John on your win in the Winter Solstice contest. Truly beautiful. Love, shar

Carrie Richards

December 22, 2008 at 6:05 PM

Well done, John...a winning poem, and well deserved to be among those chosen in the contest!! I love the dawn breaking gasp!! Happy Holidays, to you and yours! ~Love, Carrie

Des Juan Richardson

December 10, 2008 at 8:27 PM

John, this poem is one of the reasons why I have ventured into writing Haikus and other forms of poetry. This is very interesting and poetic. Thanks for your comments on my poetry and I will try to write more. Life has a way of getting in the way! ~Des Juan

Keith Bickerstaffe

December 7, 2008 at 9:09 AM

A classic HAIKU my friend! Marvelous alliterations and word choices. Best wishes, Keith

Jack Kenny

November 30, 2008 at 4:41 PM

Very interesting Haiku with a feeling that lasts _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Forever written From: Jack K.

Matthew Anish

November 30, 2008 at 2:12 PM

I think that you have hit the mark here! Haiku poer! Have a joyous holiday season

Michaela Payne

November 21, 2008 at 5:39 PM

John this was beautiful, loved every word, a picture of poetic beauty. Be blessed, ~Michaela~

Juliane Thomas

November 19, 2008 at 12:58 PM

Haiku is one of my favorite forms, and this one is beautiful...great alliterations. Love the second line especially.

Daver Austin

November 13, 2008 at 8:39 AM

Causation....thought provoking....time stopping....the sound of silence. As usual, John, your stuff is challenging. Love, daver

Brian Strand

November 2, 2008 at 11:55 PM

Excellent write John.Thanks for your much valued comments.Rgds Brian

Sara Lokken

November 2, 2008 at 7:36 PM

Wow----amazing work...yet again! As expected...:) Hugs, Sara

Christopher Higgins

November 2, 2008 at 6:02 AM

Wonderful John. I am getting into this haiku thing and I am loving it. Such a strong form . Thanks for your welcome comments.

Kristin Reynolds

November 2, 2008 at 4:59 AM

lol Sean, ya crazy Bard! Another excellent poem from Mr. Heck. Mute moments sure are a rarity in THIS crazy house - so anything that takes me there is so appriciated! lol love Kristin

Sean Kelly

November 2, 2008 at 4:22 AM

Superb Haiku from Lord Heck , but what eelse would one expect ???? ... MMMMM , another mute moment ....

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