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November rains pour from the sky, seated near window my thoughts cry, damp, cold weather and island life, memories hurt – like a knife, water bubbles gets swell and burst, deep red autumn hues are my thirst. Flocks of wintering birds fly high, warm sense grows in my inward eye, these birds console my inner strife, heart starts paying a tune from fife, birds from homeland flying unversed, reveal autumn – grief reversed. Wrote for Lay November Poetry Contest 20th November 2020 Sponsored by – William Kekaula Rhyming verified with Number of syllables verified with Grammar verified with PS Grammar check

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Date: 12/4/2020 8:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 12/5/2020 9:08:00 AM
Hi Eve, Thank you so much. Really appreciate my friend. Rasitha
Date: 12/3/2020 6:06:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. I always enjoy hearing the geese headed south in the winter but I haven't heard them this year. Sara
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 12/3/2020 6:41:00 AM
Hi Sara, Thank you so much for stopping by to complement. True, we miss those, when ever their routines change. Rasitha
Date: 12/2/2020 5:53:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Rasitha, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 12/3/2020 6:34:00 AM
Hi William, I am humbly happy about being here with other fellow poets.The best about PS is I'm learning different forms of poetry. I'm truly greatfull to all the hosts for that. Rasitha