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Winterfresh

Im chewing this gum to cheer myself up I wanna be happy but my love is chewed up it was kicked out the door, and blowen away by a hurricane lost on this earth, rotten like a sugar cane if she decides to come back i'll wait I would've been str8 but i killed my own faith if I could i'd make one wish to find my love like the lost fish emontions running in and out, like a house with no door I did the crime so what am I crying for I can sob and try to hold on but the world and her heart will still carry on what about me im feeling crazy like your boy on drugs what about her, now she has no love 4rm the 104 to the 35 to the 71 I can still taste her lips like I taste this gum Winterfresh. *i worte this poem in 2004, hope yall liked it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/21/2010 7:50:00 AM
Very nice and keep chewing that gum!! Love Scarlett
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Date: 9/20/2010 4:00:00 AM
Some good metaphoric language and emotion used in this one...Welcome to soup..I hope that your stay is long with many more great post like this one and that you find delight in reading the gifted poets here on soup..Sara
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Date: 9/17/2010 10:23:00 AM
As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Jay. A new name have we? Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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