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Winter World

Frosted pines accosted Crystal flakes Roaming in the gloaming Melancholy valley White and wan Pathos rules the sick snows Dull unpredictable Winter breeze Whistles through the thistles Valiant hills and pliant Willows dance Spilling sadness chilling Jack Frost spews cold attack Life asleep Hoar is forevermore 14th August, 2017 (When life is colourless, you tend to grow sad....)

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/19/2017 8:11:00 PM

Hi Jo, this is absolutely beautiful. Love it. Congratulations on your 3rd place win! :)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/19/2017 7:18:00 PM

Wow Jo, this is beautiful writing, so succinct, perfect 636 verse, I thought this was another poet who I love, was a nice surprise congrats on a worthy 3rd place!

Joanna Daniel
Date: 8/20/2017 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, John:) all glory be to God, the poem just seemed to flow out and am so glad you enjoyed it:)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/16/2017 6:24:00 AM

Hi Jo, i do love the peace of winter. I had to drop in on this write because it was on Winter. An excellent outlook on winter Jo. Your words sing in the sadness of Winter. You really put across your thoughts so well in this wonderful write. A beautiful poem on Winters cold breath. This would have been a top rating and it has to go into my faves. Your Friend always....Mike.