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Winter World

Winter world caught in imaginary silence of nature's endless renewal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/25/2010 1:38:00 PM
gert, you have to click on MY poems, and then the edit will appear at the top right I think. I have experimented with so many crazy things and I still don't think I have it all down yet. Nice seeing you today. andrea
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:07:00 AM
I agree with Sara. A very descriptive haiku, which fits the bill! (you lost your e on nature) Thanks for your comment. Andrea
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Date: 1/15/2010 12:56:00 PM
Great descriptive Haiku. I can feel the cold. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for your comments on my poem about my staying on the computer too much. It can become addictive just like other things. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:12:00 AM
Gert, Thank you for your well wishes and for commenting on my poetry. I really like this poem. Winter in it's lengthy "imaginary silence" ... many days, freezing helps kill many pesky larvae. Thus springtime comes with enjoyment. Your excellent second line, "imaginary silence" made me think of that. Thanks. Sincerely, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:57:00 AM
Hi Gert, What a lovely Haiku. Love these nature poems. Great visual, love the endless renewal! Take care. Thanks for sharing my friend. Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/12/2010 3:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Gert. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2010 6:23:00 PM
pretty, enjoyed reading today
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Date: 1/11/2010 6:05:00 PM
So true and concise, an endless renewal indeed...Raul
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Date: 1/11/2010 12:14:00 PM
Breathtaking haiku that speaks of winter but promises the renewal of spring. Lovely work, Gert! Love, Carolyn
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