Winter World

Winter world caught in
imaginary silence of nature's
endless renewal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 1:38 PM
gert, you have to click on MY poems, and then the edit will appear at the top right I think. I have experimented with so many crazy things and I still don't think I have it all down yet. Nice seeing you today. andrea
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January 17, 2010 at 7:07 AM
I agree with Sara. A very descriptive haiku, which fits the bill! (you lost your e on nature) Thanks for your comment. Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Great descriptive Haiku. I can feel the cold. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for your comments on my poem about my staying on the computer too much. It can become addictive just like other things. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 15, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Gert, Thank you for your well wishes and for commenting on my poetry. I really like this poem. Winter in it's lengthy "imaginary silence" ... many days, freezing helps kill many pesky larvae. Thus springtime comes with enjoyment. Your excellent second line, "imaginary silence" made me think of that. Thanks. Sincerely, Dane Ann
Sheart Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Hi Gert, What a lovely Haiku. Love these nature poems. Great visual, love the endless renewal! Take care. Thanks for sharing my friend. Love Light Patty
Brown Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 3:57 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Gert. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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January 11, 2010 at 6:23 PM
pretty, enjoyed reading today
Moreno Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 6:05 PM
So true and concise, an endless renewal indeed...Raul
Devonshire Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Breathtaking haiku that speaks of winter but promises the renewal of spring. Lovely work, Gert! Love, Carolyn
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