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WINTER WONDERS

In my safe fortress devoid of winter magic delight my mind virtually explores its reality-wonders’ height… Thus, with enthralling vicarious experience flight I thank God* for freedom to venture beyond imagination sprite …to plunge into coldness-thrill day and night … to be enthralled awesomely without cough’s fright charmed by snow’s immaculate sight … to doze toward serene slumber midst fireplace so bright along assailing below zero temperature with freezing blight… Oh, I wish to wake up, settled comfortably alright awed while vibrantly triumphing against chills’ fight from dreaming about ice-sledding spree in my prayer-plight.
*1Thessalonians 5:18 In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you. January 12, 2024 4th place, "Winter Magic - 8-12 Lines of Rhyme" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 1/15/2024

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Date: 1/15/2024 6:16:00 AM
Beata, a sweet winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/13/2024 5:49:00 AM
I love the imagery your poem has..
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Date: 1/12/2024 6:39:00 AM
Your poem touched and moved me...how even when devoid of 'real winter delight,' you're thankful for the vicarious experience (via imagination) and in your dreams....just lovely beyond compare. Have a great day...PS am faving, Sara
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