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Winter Wonderland

A bountiful bevy of beautiful birds flew by Their soft and shining silhouettes eliciting a sigh They dipped and dove and drew pictures in the air That delightful , dazzling, December day so fair The snow so softly settling on the sated ground Cheeky, chattering, calling birds the only sound Silvery shards of sunlight on the frozen lake A perfect picture, now pleasured breathes I take Nature can naturally nurture and nurse our soul When hackneyed, harried days have taken their toll
For the Alliteration , Consonance, Assonance contest

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Date: 12/30/2013 12:42:00 PM
Way to go...Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2013 9:50:00 AM
lovely imagery...congrats on the win BG
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Date: 12/26/2013 7:40:00 PM
Lovely poem with alliteration and congratulations on your fine win, Barbara
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Date: 12/26/2013 3:58:00 PM
Wonderfully done for this contest, Barbara. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/26/2013 2:39:00 PM
Barbara, thanks for this lovely, ethereal poem of the season! Nice use of alliteration, end rhyme and wrapping it up with a heartfelt thought. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest.
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Date: 11/26/2013 3:53:00 PM
your poem paints a pretty picture. Looks like a fun contest... and good luck in it!
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Date: 11/25/2013 8:50:00 PM
Lovely alliteration , Barbara
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