Winter Wonderland

A bountiful bevy of beautiful birds flew by Their soft and shining silhouettes eliciting a sigh They dipped and dove and drew pictures in the air That delightful , dazzling, December day so fair The snow so softly settling on the sated ground Cheeky, chattering, calling birds the only sound Silvery shards of sunlight on the frozen lake A perfect picture, now pleasured breathes I take Nature can naturally nurture and nurse our soul When hackneyed, harried days have taken their toll
For the Alliteration , Consonance, Assonance contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Way to go...Congrats..Sara
May Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 9:50 AM
lovely imagery...congrats on the win BG
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 7:40 PM
Lovely poem with alliteration and congratulations on your fine win, Barbara
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 3:58 PM
Wonderfully done for this contest, Barbara. Congrats for your win.
Harper Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 2:39 PM
Barbara, thanks for this lovely, ethereal poem of the season! Nice use of alliteration, end rhyme and wrapping it up with a heartfelt thought. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest.
Fisher Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 3:53 PM
your poem paints a pretty picture. Looks like a fun contest... and good luck in it!
Mehta Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Lovely alliteration , Barbara
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