Winter Walk

Crackle of frost underfoot
This snow covered wood
Where I met you...........
for the first time
 
Clouds of breathy air,
Your cloak of deep blue,
you made me stop and stare
 
For, among the holly,
we both were looking for the same thing
This cold pale sky,
With no hint of spring
 
Your first look,
Took my breath away
Your shy smile,
melted me
The sun shone.........
On that day.......
 
Woods of evergreen,
dusted with snow
This walk..........
with you
Inner glow

This walk...........,
With you,
Through snow
My heart,
Wanting you so
 
Your hand,
Warmed by mine
Your shy glance
How those blue eyes...
did dance!
 
This love did flow,
On this walk,
on fresh fallen snow
So white and clear,
Surrounded by trees of green
 
Woods of evergreen,
Fresh fallen snow
Where our love can be seen
footprints.......
side by side,
long ago
 
Where I first met you,
on that winters day,
among the holly and snow
You had far to go,
now together
Our way
seems so short so

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 2/4/2009 8:03:00 AM
What a nice reflection on love. The imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Keep on writing. Have a nice day. Karen
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Date: 10/31/2008 7:23:00 AM
bravo!
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Date: 9/14/2008 9:23:00 AM
You gave me the image of two loved ones walking under the night sky, in a park, and crossing a small bridge above a small lake...Hand in hand they walked, filled with pure love...Lovely write...tc...Sara...
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