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Winter Vine

Note-Practice Run in the barren days of winter a leafless vine wraps herself into his arms wildly and calling climbing his walls and trellises as snow and ice overhang white on white creepers on creepers evergreen possessing his face with ivy clinging closer invasive and resolute destroying other suitors in his garden bed the friction of weather is cold but hot … yearning to spring connie pachecho 2/22/25

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Date: 3/16/2025 5:36:00 AM
... evergreen possessing his face (meaning-his walls and trellises) and wildly climbing, spreading willfully, and destroying other suitors (other plants) in his path and yearning to spring (play on words)
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 3/16/2025 8:22:00 AM
there are some poems that start off as giggles and this may be one of them, but when I go over the poem ... I say, wow, this poem isn't bad at all. A scratch here, a scratch there ... viola ... more giggles. Oh Connie, you're so funny

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