Winter Tree

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                  Winter tree mistletoe loaded.....
                                                               standing underneath...

imaginationlifenaturesenryu

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Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 25, 2012 at 11:30 PM

very nicely done Sara- I have much to learn of this form, Blessings, bren: )

Bl Devnath

January 21, 2012 at 9:16 AM

Lovely one of nature enjoyed, loved, bl

Jack Horne

January 20, 2012 at 2:50 PM

Wow, I just love this clever write, Sara. A sure winner if for a contest

James Peranteau

January 20, 2012 at 8:06 AM

Beautiful write Sara ! I remember when I first learned where the misletoe came from...very exciting dear poet ! Have a blessed weekend my friend ! Much love, james

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 20, 2012 at 5:10 AM

Thank you for your kind words Sara- my son wants my modem so have to run- love and blessings, bren : )

Nette Onclaud

January 20, 2012 at 12:53 AM

oh, oh sara.. a fresh take on a senryu .. i love the contrast of loaded and underneath... the best to you! ;) hugggs!

Poet Destroyer A

January 19, 2012 at 10:57 PM

WOW! HOPE HE STOPS BY.... LOVE IT SARA... SNRYU... THAT MAKES THE IMAGE BEAT LIKE A DRUM.. UNDER A WINTER TREE... ENJOYED,..P.D.

Russell Sivey

January 19, 2012 at 3:40 PM

awaiting for what...hmmm, what would the mistletoe represent? Kisses!! So would you accept Hershey's kisses? I have some of those, somewhere here... Great poem Sara!! Awesome Work!!