Winter Touches

With falls last remnants dangling- winter touches 
Scarecrows and masked children say "So long" for now 
First flakes of white make the snow globe come to life 
Sleigh-riders sit tight

The evergreens sparkling their pines from the moon 
On the lake the ice-fishers trout takes the bait 
Mountaintops of snow like icing on cupcakes 
Firepits in flame 

Leafless trees of empty bird and squirrel nests 
Foot stomps from bucks while they're chasing does in heat 
White rabbits run- the coyote on the prowl 
Broke branches crackle
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Ashley Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 6:38 PM
Dear Charlie, winter’s inspiration touches your verses with a special kind of magic. Beautiful, my poet friend. I enjoyed your lush imagery, especially “Mountaintops of snow like icing on cupcakes” - a sensory delight!! Splendid poetry capturing the soul of the season. Warmest wishes for a happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.. ~Susan
Williams Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 7:17 AM
I guess you guys are preparing for a picturesque winter while we prepare for a summer - Crazy. Your description of winter is superb Charlie. So glad to see you writing. Hugs Maria
Meadows Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 9:48 AM
A good description of Winter. Well done.
Messina Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 3:27 AM
Thank you, Daisy :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:46 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Winter Touches" write. Winter is on the way. Have a wonderful day/week writing away.......................
Messina Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 3:32 AM
Yes, winter is almost here and I can't wait for it to be over already (lol). Thank you for your visits and comments, Paula. Much appreciated! :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 4:33 AM
You captured the winter scene well Charlie, I found it to be quite a tricky form. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Messina Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Thank you, Tom. It is a tricky form. In fact, I don't know if I did it right (lol) All is well hope you are doing well too! Charlie
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