Winter Tide

snow on stony beach

melting with incoming tide

cooling salt waters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 6, 2010 at 11:29 AM
Enjoying them haikus.
White Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 1:57 PM
cool Haiku Margaret Congrats- well deserved HM
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March 30, 2010 at 8:22 AM
Awesome Margaret, looks just like the picture I saw. Congratulations on your success. Agape, Moses
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March 30, 2010 at 1:06 AM
Oh, I really like this. I hope you did really well in the contest. Congrats.Andrea
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March 28, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Margaret, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen
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March 28, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Maggie, How are you down there?? I'm sending my warm congratulations to you on your win...And thank you for leaving your comment-always encouraging- for me...love you, Audrey
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March 28, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest....Marty
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March 28, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Margaret, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James
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March 28, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Congrats Margaret on your winning poem and HM in the Champagne Skies contest.. another beautiful write from your gifted pen and a well deserved trip to the winners circle ..luv.. see u there.. Linda-Marie..
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March 28, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Margaret. Love Carol
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March 28, 2010 at 1:06 AM
Margaret, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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March 27, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Wishing you the very best in the contest should you enter it Margaret. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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March 27, 2010 at 1:57 PM
I love your view of the picture, Maggie...really good expression of it..I finally gave up after a while..Take a look at mine when you have a few minutes...Hope you're doing fine, my friend...Love, Audrey
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March 27, 2010 at 8:05 AM
Nice use of imagery. Keep that snow melting I say. Good luck in the contest. Karen
White Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 6:06 AM
This is so nicely put, reminds me of Alaska
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March 27, 2010 at 12:51 AM
Lovely haiku, Margaret...an unexpected vision of snow on the beach...
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March 26, 2010 at 10:40 PM
Good write, lol in the contest. Charles
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March 26, 2010 at 7:24 PM
very nice sounds like for Rauls contest. enjoyed.
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March 26, 2010 at 7:02 PM
i can visualize this:)... good write... and thank you so much for your kind comments... Royal T.
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