Tania Kitchin Poet Sedoka

Winter Survival - Ws

A cold winter's night,
birds warmly nestled in nests-
frigid hibernation fight

Morning chirping songs,
scavenging frozen berries-
sparring for Spring survival

1/11/23
Contest: Winter Sedoka contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina
(checked with howmanysyllables)

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Sara Kendrick January 26, 2023 at 6:26 AM I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara Tania Kitchin January 26, 2023 at 4:16 PM sara, thank you!

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2023 at 1:26 PM i really love that sparring line!!! Congrats on your win, Tania. Tania Kitchin January 25, 2023 at 4:59 PM Andrea, thank you!

Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 9:08 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Winter Survival" is a wonderful story/write. Poor little birds. Have a blessed day.............. Tania Kitchin January 25, 2023 at 4:59 PM Paula, thank you!

Charles Messina January 25, 2023 at 5:05 AM Lovely poem and imagery, Tania. Thanks for entering my contest. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Hugs Charlie Tania Kitchin January 25, 2023 at 4:59 PM Charlie, thank you!

Timothy Ray January 13, 2023 at 11:05 AM your poem so vividly reminds me....birds in Winter....it is when i up the ground feeding....such a lovely walk in caring...loved it Tania Kitchin January 13, 2023 at 6:48 PM Tim, thank you!

Tom Cunningham January 12, 2023 at 10:16 AM I can't help but feel sorry for them Tania, can't wait for the dawn chorus to come after winter has bowed out. Tom Tania Kitchin January 12, 2023 at 2:13 PM Tom, I can't wait until Spring, thanks for your visit!

Victor Buhagiar January 12, 2023 at 1:34 AM Great imagery but I do feel the cold. Tania Kitchin January 12, 2023 at 3:54 AM Victor, thank you!

Joanna Daniel January 11, 2023 at 7:42 PM Oh yes, survival of the fittest, well penned, Tania:) Tania Kitchin January 12, 2023 at 3:54 AM Jo, thank you!