Winter Sunset

As warmth fades to cold,
The ivory landscape reflects:
Vibrant rays of sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Owens Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 8:01 PM
Very Nice Haiku...Enjoyed...Marty
Lopez Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 6:17 PM
Another beautiful Oklahoma sunset in words!!!! great job R.M.
Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 2:45 PM
I need my sunglasses. Great flow Raul...I like this one...RdP..A.K.A. Taz
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Very reflective write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Fraser Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Another delight Raul. Your Haiku's would make lovely paintings >> James
Chircop Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 10:22 AM
I can feel this Winter Sunset,i just cant feel those vibrant rays anymore..and it is sad..beautiful haiku Raul..Charma
Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 9:29 AM
Excellent Haiku Raul..... Very creative friend....Keep em comin'.......:JP]
Haick Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 7:45 AM
Another picture-perfect Haiku, Raul! Beautiful! Peace and love, Audrey
Thomas Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Beautiful haiku, Raul. I love the image of an "ivory landscape" reflecting the rays of the sun. ~Juliane
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