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Winter Sunset

As warmth fades to cold, The ivory landscape reflects: Vibrant rays of sun.

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Date: 12/3/2009 8:01:00 PM

Very Nice Haiku...Enjoyed...Marty

Date: 12/3/2009 6:17:00 PM

Another beautiful Oklahoma sunset in words!!!! great job R.M.

Date: 12/3/2009 2:45:00 PM

I need my sunglasses. Great flow Raul...I like this one...RdP..A.K.A. Taz

Date: 12/3/2009 2:02:00 PM

Very reflective write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Date: 12/3/2009 1:12:00 PM

Another delight Raul. Your Haiku's would make lovely paintings >> James

Date: 12/3/2009 10:22:00 AM

I can feel this Winter Sunset,i just cant feel those vibrant rays anymore..and it is sad..beautiful haiku Raul..Charma

Date: 12/3/2009 9:29:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Raul..... Very creative friend....Keep em comin'.......:JP]

Date: 12/3/2009 7:45:00 AM

Another picture-perfect Haiku, Raul! Beautiful! Peace and love, Audrey

Date: 12/3/2009 6:06:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, Raul. I love the image of an "ivory landscape" reflecting the rays of the sun. ~Juliane