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While driving, a strong sunbeam hit my hands and revealed my mother's hands on the steering wheel..They could not have been mine for they were too old and wrinkled..

Winter Sunbeams

winter's sunbeams flow through dotted cumulus clouds... ancient hands revealed
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 22, 2015 at 10:42 PM
SARA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 5:24 AM
I think it is a haiku oh sooo great "ancient hands revealed " wow Sara..so sensational.God bless.Rated 7++++++ ad infinitum..
Fraser Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Love the warmth in your Senryu Sara, hugs, James :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 11:30 AM
this you, sara... soft, deep and sensitive.. what a fine senryu.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Nice flow of words and a pleasant sounding poem with all the right syllable count. Good Job!
Sirak Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 8:59 AM
This is a simply stunning senyru, Sara. Your words are the visual and the pictures a mere accompaniment.
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 6:27 AM
- Oh, so beautiful - I wish you a wonderful day, dear Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 11:35 PM
Oh, I like this! What a creative analogy, too! A 7 from me! :)
D. Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:32 PM
hope you decide to slam me back, no pressure im not re slamming anyone and I promise I wont get offended or cry. already some great lines that got me good its all in fun.
D. Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:30 PM
I like the last line great senryu. very profound.
Allison Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Lovely imagery Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Anish Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 2:55 PM
It is a haiku since it is about nature. What hands did you mean - the hands of God? Intresting Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Carroll Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 1:56 PM
Good write Sara.. Nicely penned!
Trifiatis Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 1:10 PM
Heavenly beautiful, dear Sara!
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