Roy Pett Poet Pantoum

Winter Stroll

Early morn slight chill in fresh air
ground frost glistening in sun light
walked awhile no worries or despair 
enjoying views, all natures delights,

ground frost glistening in sun light 
extremely pleasurable, contented feel
enjoying views, all natures delights
inspiring both body and soul to heal,

extremely pleasurable, contented feel
knowing that we are loved without woes 
inspiring both body and soul to heal
aromas of wild flowers, scented rose,

knowing that we are loved without woes
Mother Natures natural surrounding
aromas of wild flowers, scented rose,
our beautiful park, peaceful, astounding,

Mother natures natural surrounding 
walked awhile no worries or despair 
our beautiful park, peaceful, astounding 
early morn slight chill in fresh air.

Composed 12/10/2017

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Janice Canerdy October 19, 2017 at 9:00 PM This is really lovely, Roy. CONGRATS! Janice Roy Pett October 20, 2017 at 1:58 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Janice. :))

Alexis Y. October 19, 2017 at 2:58 PM Hi Roy, This a well written nature write, with amazing imagery. Congratulations on your HM:-) Alexis Roy Pett October 19, 2017 at 4:18 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Alexis, surprised and really pleased to achieve a HM. :))

Jan Allison October 19, 2017 at 12:38 PM What wonderful imagery Roy a joy to read this evening i do enjoy writing and reading this challenging form:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Roy Pett October 19, 2017 at 4:16 PM Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations Jan, so pleased with a HM. :))

Eve Roper October 19, 2017 at 11:22 AM Roy, congratulations on your win! Roy Pett October 19, 2017 at 4:09 PM Thank you so much for your congratulations Eve, your support is much appreciated. :))

John Gondolf October 19, 2017 at 5:17 AM Roy, I enjoyed reading your poem; I can almost smell that fresh morning air. Congrats on your placement. Roy Pett October 19, 2017 at 5:22 AM Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations John, much appreciated. :))

Susan Ashley October 18, 2017 at 9:29 PM Returning to congratulate you Roy on your fine win with your lovely poem. Roy Pett October 19, 2017 at 4:29 AM Thank you very much Susan for your support and congratulations much appreciated. :))

Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2017 at 8:57 PM A lovely stroll! Congrats on your placement! Kim Rodrigues October 19, 2017 at 5:17 AM You’re welcome, Roy! Roy Pett October 19, 2017 at 4:28 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations and placing my poem in your contest, thanks again for your support. :))

Darren White October 13, 2017 at 2:06 AM Roy, you delivered a fantastic pantoum, the last stanza proves it. That is always the first stanza I will read when someone writes a pantoum. Because it proves if a real poem has been written, or of it's a quilt without connection. Good luck in the contest :) Roy Pett October 13, 2017 at 7:00 AM Thank you very much Darren, I am overjoyed to receive such a wonderful comment from an outstanding poet such as you my friend, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :)))

Susan Ashley October 12, 2017 at 7:13 PM A beautiful write Roy full of lovely imagery, rhyme and flow. Good luck in the contest! Roy Pett October 13, 2017 at 6:55 AM Thank you so much Susan, I really appreciate your support and your very kind comment. :))

Vijay Pandit October 12, 2017 at 10:49 AM Beautiful scenery in your poem--lovely flow--reads like a winter stroll--best for a win, Roy! Roy Pett October 12, 2017 at 12:09 PM Thank you very much Vijay, I find this form quite difficult so really pleased to receive your very kind comment. :))