Winter Storm

Winter Storm


            the storm approaches,
            ominous, black clouds dust the sky,
            cries of a lost cat.

                    12/1/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 7:35 AM
A "Wonderful" haiku write. Few words with much said. Poor cat~needs a home. Have a blessed day...................
Romios Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Yes, they need homes,Paula. Nice of you to visit... Panagiota
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 10:11 AM
this is great haiku feel, Pangie. I really like it.
Romios Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 12:42 PM
Thank you.have to measure each word now. Kidding Pangie xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Hello Panagiota, I feel sorry for the outdoors cats that are homeless. They suffer in the winter storms. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Hello Panagiota, yes pet adoption is a good idea. I agree. Hugs.
Romios Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Good Morning. Yes Darlene, so true! Thats why I encourage pet adoption. None of us would like to live in cage.would we? Never leave cats alone outdoors. Pangie xoxo
Cunningham Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 3:11 AM
Time to take shelter, hopefully someone will give him refuge. Tom
Romios Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Hey, Tom! I am with you. Cats do not last harsh winters well! Pangie xoxo
Callus Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 1:39 AM
You bring this image to life, Pangie. We had some stormy weather a few days ago, and our cat wanted out, but soon was scratching and whining at the window! I feel sorry for the lost cat :( ~ Hope that you are now slowly getting better. Best regards // paul
Callus Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 12:44 PM
I am glad that you have 5star service thanks to your daughter and family, Pangie. Breaks do not heal fast, but I am sure you lack not patience and perseverance! Regards // paul
Romios Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Paul! Thank you for asking about me..yes, I broke the largest bone in my body, the left femur.plus now have a bionic left knee joint. My daughter takes care of me 24/7. I am living with her family plus dog))) Cats do not like the cold or heat. I have two vagrant calico who visit..we make sure they have water....your visit was a welcomed surprise. Next week will find out if I can put weight on left leg. Great you wrote! Merci Pangie xoxo
Romios Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Bless you all for writing. Broken leg is aching tonight. Rarely do I write Haikus. My love-and respect to Kim, Gershon, richard and Chetta PR
Theraven Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 5:56 PM
Panagiota, Oh wow.., ominous clouds dusted in a brilliant Haiku. -Richard
Romios Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 9:16 AM
So aporckative you liked it. Pangie
Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 5:30 PM
Ooh, the last line stabs me in the ribs. ~ Frank Zappa'd
Romios Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 9:17 AM
It does me, the same way, Gershon. Pangie x
Achara Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 5:08 PM
Succinctly written. I enjoyed this haiku.
Romios Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Chetta, so grateful you let me know Pangie x
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