Winter Soulscape-Potd

So glad, Raven you found this. I'd be willing to erase all my poetry for this one! Thank you for acknowledging this. Pangie

Holy Guacamole! Going in your FAVS. A double thank you.I am glad you see me growing, I hope to pen more like this. Life does not have to be all about happy Haikus, I am sure. But ..how this one came to me is out of the realm of my understanding, thats fine.))) My poetry is undergoing a sizzling transformation, IMHO...few will notice it with the depth you have I feel I am on a Starship, headed in a nouveau Direction in another galaxy, Pangie Thank you

Hi Madelyn...glad you caught the power, this one can be interpreted in many ways. After I wrote it, I doubted posting it, but had tbe strange sense it was a winner. And so...it was. Is my Fav poem I ever wrote, I have grown weary of long, poetry. It no longer moves me. It's great to get a POTD.but one must keep exploring new forms! Be well, my friend! PANAGIOTA

Sorry Alexis for Late Reply, I am so glad you caught the originality of his haiku. It's far from ordinary. I can tell yo have a deep soul.)) this was a great way to start the New Year, with friends lime you.... Thank you....Pangie

Hi Maureen~ the Haiku hit me suddenly. I don't see it as ominous but we poets each see things, differently, right? HNY, by the way~ have days of joyM Pangie..

Hi Angela~ golly, never saw that movie!! Thank you for the response!! Wishing you a miraculous week. Pangie

Anitha, oh, so glad you caught the imagery. Thank you for commenting Pangie

Constance, sorry for late response. How sweet of You to visit. I love your description of this. Wonderfully said.)) Pangie

Merci.

Hi Akkina, exactly! It is beautiful. I hesitated on posting this but knew in my poetic soul, it had depth. So Really surprised today to see it as a POTD. Bless you, Pangie.

Be careful Panagiota my poems might get you down, can be very fatalistic irreverent and blunt at times, cheers David

Be still my heart....I love rhyming Sedokus )))) How absolutely sweet of you to suggest this be a POTW, David. You must be some Poet to catch the cadence and the on purpose starkness. Adding you to my to follow list. You understand me. Poetry is far more than Norman Vincent Peale. Its a wide world..,Though I like those as well...wrote thousands of uplifting poems. Pangie

Its meant to show the other face of winter. It really is a mood evoker far beyond Frosty the the snowman. Ching Ching LOL. Both are valid. I don't walk about thinking this. The haiku just hit me. Honestly, Brandy, I have 18 pages Of woo- Hoo poetry. Shakespeare wrote Hamlet, hardly a ha ha work. But he was quiets a varied poet. It's how a Poem is constructed that counts plus nuances. This has nuance.glad to find a new Poet side in me....)) thank you,,,,,Pangie

Hi Anne Lise, truly this a Happy New Year. I am excited you took time to stop By today. Thank you for doing so. Pangie

Hello Pagnaiota, okay go get some rest. Winter has its good side and bad. Hugs Darlene xx

Darlene! It's a powerful way to describe it, I think, I am glad you commented, not feeling well. Excuse the late response, was asleep and not feeling good. Take care, my friend,,, Pangie

Rob, thank you. I was more than satisfied with this...so grateful you liked it. It's different than the haikus I have written in the past. Pangie

Vitot! Appreciate your words, hope you are feeling better These days! Pangie

Yes, I agree, it is awesome, Jennifer mou. Believe me ...I am loving this day, dear sis. Hope you are too! Hugs from the USA, Pangie.

Hi Paula..,will obey and follow your advice. Thank you for taking time to comment. As you said...Come on Spring.. No confetti but have a horn to blow... Pangie

Love to hear from you,,,thank you for so doing, I wish I could write more of these..haikus can be anything, This one I felt power in....)) Accepting your congratulations, Arturo Pangie

Tania, hello and thank you. The seasons provide pictures to draw from and a range of emotions. Thank you for appreciating the dark imagery. It's not my forte. But I see a new side to write about. Thank you. Pangie

Dear Tom~ this haiku, is my best. If anyone wants to see my others..that are about other topics, there are 18 pages of poetry to read I have completed, some, I should repost.i have been at PS 19 months, I think. Pangie

Hey, thanks my friend, Pangie

Here in California it is dark and dreary but far from what you are going through. I spent 35 years in Chicago winters, snow, ice and bare trees... Yikes. I longed for the Soring. It was astonishingly lovely. Ca is like Spring all year. Now is colder but no bare trees though. No boots..no ice. Hope to see you again...will put you on my to follow list. Pangie. I have 1' 825 poems done in 19 months. Now coasting! Pangie

As humans, it is realistic to me, to face the painful side of life. God is always there.. Winter sucks to me, Besides that, this is a powerful haiku, I knew it would not be liked. Matters not. I like it.thank you. Pangie ##

Richard, thank you. I do agree on that line)))" It does have a unique meaning. Each poet sees what they see. It came up by itself and suggests anything the reader sees. I get worn out with poems being the bluebird of happiness.))) I have penned many of those.)) winter and I are not best friends. It shows in this poem. Nothing more, Pangie##