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Poetic Form: Free Verse

Inspired: 2023 December 02

Image: Man, Woman Winter by Pixabay

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'Tis a parable of inseparable binary's whose snowprints melted in silent tales. Their bodies heat 'neath winter coats that hides their Sunday's best white finaries. Her pleasant hands sheathed in crispy ivory that dainty fingers concealed last year's gems. The storefront doors with hung bells rang in clamorous syncing with church bell towers. The towns are all as flustered as a binary glow as one from handhelds on sidewalks to well-measured hugs uphill. Never apart, never alone, constants they'll be, being binaries like the system's phenomenal binary as one, the Earth, the Moon, and the ruling Sun. "It's getting late my dear, enjoyed our walk, I know I did, and you my dear," "I have my love, as I have each and every year my love, okay my love, let's start back home." "Alrighty then, we need to do the huggy thing as we're going downhill, my dear, now be careful, no need to rush, my dear." "Alright, my love." When we get home, my dear, I'll start up the fire in the fireplace, my dear." "I think you already did my love?" "Oh my, I love you my dear, always." "And I never stopped loving you my love." "Oh, we almost forgot, Merry Christmas my dear." "Merry Christmas to you too my love."

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Date: 12/2/2023 11:24:00 PM
What a touching and soulful poem this is, i wonder what the weather like is in hawaii during winter? Does it get cold? I love the rhythm of your poem, it has a very captivating cadence throughout because of how you phrase lines and emotions. The ending is so touching and so soulful. A romantic wintry tale youv shared in a most poetic manner. Leaving us readers in awe, amazed by the flow and depth. Brilliant diction too.i love the imagery. Descriptive and delicately flowing. Pleasure reading this
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Ink Empress
Date: 12/3/2023 5:46:00 AM
Definitely hawaii is a must visit for me. I always wanted to go there. Here in maldives we dont get snow although iv seen snow and been in winter as i travel but seeing snow pictures makes me want to be in snow right now hah unpopular wish though thank you for explaining
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/3/2023 5:17:00 AM
Our mountains makes us the coldest islands when they snow, my island of Hawaii have Mauna Kea 13.8k (tallest in state), and Mauna Loa 13.6k (largest volcano in the world), and some parts of Maui Mount Haleakala 10k. However, due to sea levels proximity, weather chill factor is temperated to low 50's at its most extremes. Continue --->
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/3/2023 5:16:00 AM
Continue --->Same reason that all the islands don't go over 99. I am very grateful for your stellar review as all your reviews has never shown any lacking of respect, very honorable. Aloha, William

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