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Winter Sonata Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jcb Brul 11/28/2023

Listen to the rain falling down, it sounds as you are playing the drums. Listen to the wind blowing, it blows straight from your heart when you play the saxophone. Listen to the music of the snow falling, It's the winter sonata performing on the right stage. A right silhouete on the shade, with beautiful shoes to dance on. A serenade disguised behind the sounds of winter when you used to be performing. The winter sonata brings us new tunes to listen to, new deaths to say good bye, new births to say hello, new sorrows, new joys to be envolved in. New music notes will be played in the dark winter to be flourish in our garden's soul.

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Date: 11/29/2023 6:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this several times Maria. I especially like the ending: el alma de nuestro jardín... We are always constant gardeners. Thanks
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/29/2023 12:55:00 PM
Un poco
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/29/2023 12:22:00 PM
Good evening Jeff. I'm happy you enjoyed. I see you can speak Spanish, can't you?. Thanks so much for your comment. Blessings!
Date: 11/28/2023 4:19:00 PM
a beautiful, descriptive tribute to the serenity of winter--a time when we can flourish in the garden of reflection of our soul. I loved these lines: Listen to the rain falling down, it sounds as you are playing the drums. Listen to the wind blowing, truly delicate and masterful, Maria. Have to fave this one...have a great evening, Sara
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/28/2023 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Sara. How beautiful words as yours can change a difficoult day. My blessings to you my friend!

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