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Winter Sonata Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jcb Brul 11/28/2023

Winter Sonata

Listen to the rain falling down,
it sounds as you are playing the drums.
Listen to the wind blowing,
it blows straight from your heart when you play the saxophone. 
Listen to the music of the snow falling, 
It's the winter sonata performing on the right stage.
A right silhouete on the shade,
with beautiful shoes to dance on.
       
A serenade disguised behind
the sounds of winter when
you used to be performing.
The winter sonata brings us
new tunes to listen to,
new deaths to say good bye,
new births to say hello,
new sorrows, new joys 
to be envolved in.
New music notes will be played 
in the dark winter to be flourish
in our garden's soul.
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Connelly Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 6:37 AM
I enjoyed reading this several times Maria. I especially like the ending: el alma de nuestro jardín... We are always constant gardeners. Thanks
Connelly Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Un poco
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Good evening Jeff. I'm happy you enjoyed. I see you can speak Spanish, can't you?. Thanks so much for your comment. Blessings!
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