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11/ 27/ 23

Winter Sonata

Contest by JCB Brul

WINTER SONATA

WINTER SONATA

           We were in sweet honeymoon trip
            in a rural area untouched by tourist.
            Winter entered with utmost windy breeze
              Smoggy ambient covered in cloudy canopy.
              Low luminous shimmering Sun hiding itself
                     in misty dusty sky.
               Dawn dew drops dazzling like diamond
                on glossy glass blades and leaf lamina
                greeted us at entrance path.

                 Our lavender love rolled, rippled on snowy splendor
                       in calm cold chilly wonder.
                  Icicles hanging from roof of our room.
               On background shown mountain with snow cap.
            Severe Winter felt guilt as we quivered even under quilt,
                    Ardent amour strongly desired for warmth .
            Spent charming night, embraced tight in cozy sojourn.
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Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 8:50 AM
- Lovely written ... charming romantic winter night, Anisha :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Dutta Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Thanks. Hugs.
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