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Winter Solstice

So long ago, you might recall,
when winter's shroud of dark would fall
each ritual eased the Celtic mind
to mark the sun's reversal trend

When winter's shroud of dark would fall
fresh woven wreaths adorned each door
A yule log burned, and it was clear
with smoke there rose a new frontier

Each ritual eased the Celtic mind
with many ways to celebrate
Pagans danced with woven crowns
Sun's ebbing presence dwindled down

To mark the sun's reversal trend
folks pressed red apples to the core
Then drank it spiced, to offer toasts
which we have done, forevermore


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Shall We Retourne sounds like a tough one but you did it with this winner !!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Merryman Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 7:39 PM
A very interesting look at this Celtic celebration! Congrats on your wonderful win, Carrie! Love, Kim
Ober Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 9:28 PM
I knew this would be a winner!! Congratulations :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 9:21 AM
Conrad's Carrie and thanks so much for trying the form & for your focus on a Celtic Christmas Light & Love
A  Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. ...Love SKAT
Ober Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Oh, you nailed this form!! It flows so naturally despite the limitations. I especially love that last stanza. A beautiful tradition.
Ryerson Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 9:23 PM
My favorite poet and hero has 'retourned" again...I am CLUELESS as to how to write these kind of poems but you have done it with your usual style and grace...
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November 12, 2015 at 12:45 AM
Really nice, and I thought bright and chirpy with lovely imagery.
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