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Winter Solstice

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as days fade to night the season blights to winter dearth of light brings haggard chills landscape bedraggled shriveled to black then bleached white cries ice tears then hibernates

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/26/2023 6:31:00 AM
I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 1/25/2023 1:31:00 PM
Excellent phrasings!!
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Date: 1/25/2023 4:46:00 AM
Oops! John, I loved your poem. Unfortunately, in your last sentence you had only 5 syllables which needed to be (7) otherwise your poem would have finished higher. Thanks for entering my contest. Congratulations on your placement... Charlie
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John Anderson
Date: 1/25/2023 8:43:00 AM
OK poem updated. Thanks and Cheers.

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