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Winter Solstice

Drawn-out nights come with
Brief days now the sun sits still
We sit by the fire

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December 5, 2008 at 2:37 PM

Like the use of personification in the second line. The last line is a pleasant thought--good way to pass the evening. Keep on writing! Have a good day. Karen

Angela Crabtree

December 3, 2008 at 10:55 PM

Thanks for your sweet comment. It seems there have been quite a few of us in a writers dilemna. lol This was a wonderful description of winter and making the best of it. I love the way you write. You rock! Love, Ivy

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

December 3, 2008 at 6:37 PM

Congratulations Laura I assume YOU entered a Contest by Seashell Island I to have one there Good Luck YOUR Humble Protege...HG

Elaine George

December 3, 2008 at 3:22 AM

I love this Hailu, lara. Beautiful visual. lainie

Joseph Spence Sr

November 29, 2008 at 12:49 PM

I like the comparative analysis between the sun and sitting before the fire to get warm. The images are wonderful. I like the essence of the poem and the message. Great job! ~Joseph

Brian Strand

November 27, 2008 at 12:08 AM

Like the analogy in L2/3 Laura.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Deneen White

November 26, 2008 at 3:38 PM

such a picturesque and peace filled write, hope that you are well, and thanks for your comments, take care D-nyce

James Foulk

November 24, 2008 at 12:32 PM

that fire sound real nice, as i type this i'm in a room of the house that is very cold, it faces the mountains and there is this valley between us and them and nothing to stop the cold winds, so i can't be on the computer very long. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.

Brian Strand

November 23, 2008 at 1:50 AM

You capture winter so well in this image Laura'now the sun sits still'.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Milton Toran

November 22, 2008 at 7:38 PM

Nice tribute to nature. I love winter, it's my favorite of the four seasons. Thanks for the kind sentiments on my featured write. Milt

Nigel Fawcett

November 22, 2008 at 12:14 PM

Lovely Haiku, Laura. I've got my cosy log fire going here. Good luck if you are entering seashell's contest (and if the bugs in the soup are frustrating you then see my blog). Love, Nigel

Michaela Payne

November 22, 2008 at 8:27 AM

I love sitting by the fire :) this was a beautiful haiku, thank you so much for your comment on mine, and other poems I appreciate it :) Blessings, ~Michaela~