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Winter Shelter

WINTER SHELTER A VE|RY VERY P|RICKLY HOLLY LEA|F A SHELTER FOR THE WINTE|R BLOWN, COLD HUNGRY TOO.|SO WELCOME WERE THE BE|RRIES, NOW FED, THIRST |QUENCHED, NEXT A RE|ST, NOW REFRESHES|READY TO CONTINUE TH|EIR JOURNEY. THREE HUNDRE|D MILES TO FLY BEFORE THEY REACH| MY GARDEN, WELL ONE OR TWO, O|N GOOD DAYS MORE SEEKIN|G OUT MORE BERRIES. OF |THE LUCKY FEW A S|LICE OF JUICY |APPLE R|ED |W| |i| |n| |g| |s|

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Date: 11/30/2017 7:44:00 AM
Oh my god! Superb poem. In CBSE books too, there is a poem on snake like yours. I will surely give this link to my students to see. New way of expressing excellent ideas by a verse. I too am developing Monorhyme. I need appreciation from you if you are free and feel to do so. Be blessed and keep reviewing Pari Style poems.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 11/30/2017 10:17:00 AM
Wow, love your response, thanking you most kindly. Honoured I am that you find it worthy of a link to your students, that is quite a compliment, thank you! Not sure of 'Pari Style poems', is that a way of saying poetry in fashion, regardless I review all manner of poetry. On/of the latter I find that re. formats there is far to much bending of the rules, tantamount to breaking them, a topic for another day. Many thanks Sanket :)
Date: 11/30/2017 7:40:00 AM
Oh my god! Superb poem. In CBSE books too, there is a poem on snake like yours. I will surely give this link to my students to see. New way of expressing excellent ideas by a verse. I too am developing Monorhyme. I need appreciation from you if you are free and feel to do so. Be blessed and keep reviewing Pari Style poems.
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