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Winter Sedoka

the air acquires the crisp, cool, dry sensation and my lungs rejoice at breath - the flakes falls lightly then get packed down underfoot and my eyes rejoice at snow

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:21:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2023 1:19:00 PM

a very nice one for the contest this was. BIG congrats

Corey Bryan
Date: 1/25/2023 1:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea! I really appreciate it.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 5:30:00 AM

This is really nice, Corey. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering... Charlie

Corey Bryan
Date: 1/25/2023 6:54:00 AM

Thanks for sponsoring! Sedoka is a great form and I had a great time writing it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/13/2023 1:14:00 PM

Hello Corey Bryan, a lovely poem of winter. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/14/2023 10:58:00 AM

Hello Corey, you are very welcome. Enjoy your weekend. My friend.

Corey Bryan
Date: 1/13/2023 2:40:00 PM

Hello Darlene. Thank you so much for your kind comment, I really appreciate it : ) Have a wonderful day as well, lovely to meet you.