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Winter Sedoka

the air acquires
the crisp, cool, dry sensation
and my lungs rejoice at breath
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the flakes falls lightly
then get packed down underfoot
and my eyes rejoice at snow

Copyright © C.W. Bryan | Year Posted 2023

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January 26, 2023 at 6:21 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2023 at 1:19 PM

a very nice one for the contest this was. BIG congrats

January 25, 2023 at 1:31 PM

Thank you so much Andrea! I really appreciate it.

Charles Messina

January 25, 2023 at 5:30 AM

This is really nice, Corey. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering... Charlie

January 25, 2023 at 6:54 AM

Thanks for sponsoring! Sedoka is a great form and I had a great time writing it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 13, 2023 at 1:14 PM

Hello Corey Bryan, a lovely poem of winter. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 14, 2023 at 10:58 AM

Hello Corey, you are very welcome. Enjoy your weekend. My friend.

January 13, 2023 at 2:40 PM

Hello Darlene. Thank you so much for your kind comment, I really appreciate it : ) Have a wonderful day as well, lovely to meet you.

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