Winter Scene

Winter Scene

A white domain, rhythmic tinkling of bells
the pure mystery of diagonals 
and gliding along snow-lanes 
Mystical plumes from flared nostrils, 
snow crunching under animated hooves.
A sled streaming through stillness,
stone-carved beauty alive in shape and form
A temporary world that feels timeless.



11/19/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/10/2016 5:51:00 PM
Suzanne, this one gave me a "shiver" as the winds chill the evening and the leaves abandon the trees. You "painted" a lovely picture
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Date: 10/9/2016 3:42:00 PM
Wonderful winter imagery, Suzanne. Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/8/2016 9:43:00 PM
Suzanne- such a lovely poem..congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 10/8/2016 9:18:00 PM
Many wonderful winter images in this poem. Congrats on your trophy win.
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:23:00 PM
Such a wonderful mood to this poem. I can really see that horse just gliding in on the snow as if it were a cloud. I especially love those winter nights, where even the sky is solid white. I also enjoy how the focus is on the sled and horse, rather than the human. Makes it more mysterious.
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Date: 1/14/2016 11:29:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Date: 11/30/2015 3:49:00 PM
a serene scene of snow is painted here. Love the imagery.
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Date: 11/30/2015 12:49:00 PM
Almost makes me like snow. Almost but my dislike of winter still prevails. Nicely done Blessings Edith
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:50:00 AM
- A beautiful winter picture, Suzanne - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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