Winter Scene

I look at a completely still landscape
The trees, bushes, lawn and path
Seem covered in whitewash

For Rick’s Winter kimo contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Undertaker Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 2:31 AM
great! can visualize your picture. great
Horsman Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 10:49 AM
snow the purest of white, while your wonderful poetry, the purest of this art..
Austin Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 10:05 AM
Yes. I can see it, the sun giving it a liquid sheen. good stuff. Love, daver
La France Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 7:28 AM
Jack, a lovely Kimo, just beautiful, and best of luck in the contest, constance
Williams Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 12:32 PM
Jack excellent, good luck...David
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 5:35 AM
Lovely written, Jack .... Hope you had a nice Valentine's day. - - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 12:05 AM
now this is SOUPER duper!!! Love how you did your kimo, my friend.
Lewis Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 6:30 PM
A beautiful description of a lovely wintery atmosphere and recalling how winter used to be when I lived in New York. But not missing it though. Simmplissity = Patricia Lewis
Wesley Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 4:58 PM
That describes my world up here perfectly Jack; we haven't had this much snow for years so maybe the weather controllers are leaving us alone this year. Great entry for the contes andbest wishes. Love, Lizzie
Bauer Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 3:52 PM
lovely!
Haick Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 2:32 PM
Lovely Kimo, Jack. perfect imagery. Best wishes for the contest! Always, Annalise
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 2:03 PM
Very descriptive of a scene..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your chilled scene today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Sivey Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 1:35 PM
This is a brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I loved reading about this winter landscape that you so illustriously described! What a creative piece, Great Work!!
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