Winter Rose

The cold is coming on 
the wind is moaning high above
the frozen days are long,
let's build a fire, my love

When winter's gone
will you still keep me warm?
When dark skies clear, 
will you leave with the storm?

Outside, our noses freeze
a chill comes whistling through
in drifts up to our knees,
hot when I look at you

When winter's gone,
will you still linger on?
As spring arrives then
where will you be found?

The snow floats gently down
each white lace flake unique
There's no one else around
and we've no need to speak

The sky holds icy stars
that gleam against the crystal blue
the city lights are far
and I'm closer to you

When winter's gone,
will memories stay long?
When icy streams thaw,
will I be alone?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Castillo Rioux  Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 9:49 AM
This is amazing congrats on the win ??
Castillo Rioux  Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Sorry it changed my smily into question marks you did great
Yvonne Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on your first place win!
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:19 PM
Congrats on a great win, dear Kate!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Haight Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Hi Kate, I loved your poem. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Sandra
Ginsberg Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 1:17 AM
I did? Well I'm glad everyone enjoyed this. I forgot all about submitting it. I'm surprised.
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 11:57 PM
Congrats Kate"When winter's gone, will memories stay long? When icy streams thaw, will I be alone?" so wonderful. Love>>>rajat
Mehta Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 8:47 PM
Lovely write on lovely rose, congrats on the win, Kate
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:13 PM
amazing descriptive imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Kate, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:06 PM
Hi Kate, this was by far my favorite title and poem. Love the wonder and cold, icy stars. PD
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