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Winter Rhyme

12/1/12 wind cools chimes rain drizzles on the fresh thyme winter rhyme

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2013 12:30:00 AM

this is awesome a rhyming haiku with great imagery as well. thanks so much for reading my older poetry and commenting to them, Laura. I wish it were not so late, I'd read a few more of yours tonight!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/15/2013 6:34:00 PM

Good poem - JH

David Scott

Date: 1/4/2013 6:36:00 AM

now that is a word thyme intresting when i was writing my sublime poem trying to come up with words wow cool write tooxx davidscott

Dan Kearley

Date: 1/2/2013 7:14:00 PM

You must be somewhere warmer for rain with that winter rhyme? Ha,ha..Cute I must also say... :o)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/2/2013 5:58:00 PM

Cute one..Enjoyed reading ..Sara