Winter Promise

The heavy cold grey skies
Tell of winter's want of lightness
Then lemon white breaks
Through the clouds
A painter's brush
Touches the ground
In the distance 
A promise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 12:56 AM
Returning to this one, which is utterly beautiful in its imagery.
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December 23, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Linda, I chanced on this beauty while searching a poem of yours I had not read. So wow, a FAV for you too, Lady. Luv, Andrea
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November 22, 2010 at 11:32 AM
Many ocngrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Linda. Love,Carol
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November 21, 2010 at 5:36 PM
Congrats Linda on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all today.. hope u and family will enjoy a very Happy Thanksgiving with lots of luv... appreciate your warm and welcome comments luv..
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March 19, 2010 at 12:18 PM
What an uplifting view. Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. I enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a good weekend. Karen
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March 19, 2010 at 3:38 AM
Concise. . .yet far reaching. Good work!
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March 17, 2010 at 11:34 AM
What a wonderful day it is today and it is a pleasure to have time to read some poetry today. I am happy that yours is amongst the ones I have read today Linda. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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