Winter Preview

Not a single flake of snow has fallen,
Yet the ground is covered with white.
Jack Frost is delivering sparkling rime
On this November moonlit night.

Wind has been welcomed to join in the game.
He is waiting to bite your nose,
And Jack Frost, the rascal,. is capable 
Of nipping away at your toes.

You attend their gala at your own risk,
Before Winter comes at full speed.
The party hosted by Jack is a blast,
A welcome to Winter indeed.

For Brian’s 12 line contest

Won a 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "You Choose Again" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Congrats Joyce on another beautiful win for this phenomenal poetry my friend.. hope things are settling down for u now..luv..
M V Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 6:14 AM
It really gives the preview of winter,Joyce.Congratulations on big win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 6:10 AM
That is a reminder of what we still may have to come. Congratulations. xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 10:54 PM
a very cool wintry poem, my friend. Congrats on your win.
Freeman Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 5:45 PM
Beautiful, as usual Joyce, Congratulations on your worthy verse. Agape, Moses
Falotico Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 3:29 PM
Super Congrats on your win... luv Michael
Quigley Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 2:21 PM
We would have welcomed frost but got snow instead, in Oct. Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Joyce
Quigley Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Make that a win. A senior moment I'm afraid. Sorry Joyce
Mossburg Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 7:05 PM
This is a very enjoyable read. I enjoy these images of winter. Good luck in the contest. P.S. Thanks so much for commenting on my lulluby. glad you liked it.
Jones Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 7:53 PM
brrrrrr! never myself warmed up to cold weather, but blast parties helped get me through them. as did hot chocolate, hot baths and LOTs of blankets. Best in the contest, Joyce, enjoyed the read, thanks ~N
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November 11, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Chilly images throughout... a perfect write and a winning piece... luv Michael
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