Grace Eunsong Lee Poet Free verse

Winter Poems I

Tonight
the street is full of poems
hanging, shimmering
frozen petals in the air

He who dares to pick one
makes no imprint in the holy snow.


©2010.10.


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I would love it if Soupers could give me some critical feedback. I don't even mind very very strong critiques as long as they're constructive. I'm always encouraged by all the positive comments you all give me, but I think it's time to upgrade my writing skills. ;) So come on and take my poem to pieces, people! :D

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Bic Gi-Sa November 20, 2017 at 4:06 PM Yeah I don't know how to critique something so good, I enjoy your pieces and they are all you so keep doing what you do how you do it, I enjoy it all.

Skat A January 3, 2016 at 6:45 PM I like the winter poem

Wilma Neels October 26, 2010 at 11:24 AM Grace how do one critique something you like? I love this piece ;) thanks for your comment today ;)

Doris Culverhouse October 26, 2010 at 5:45 AM it is great to me!! LOVE it!