Winter Poems I
Tonight
the street is full of poems
hanging, shimmering
frozen petals in the air
He who dares to pick one
makes no imprint in the holy snow.
©2010.10.
-NOTICE-
I would love it if Soupers could give me some critical feedback. I don't even mind very very strong critiques as long as they're constructive. I'm always encouraged by all the positive comments you all give me, but I think it's time to upgrade my writing skills. ;) So come on and take my poem to pieces, people! :D
Copyright © Grace Eunsong Lee | Year Posted 2010
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