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Winter Poems I

Tonight the street is full of poems hanging, shimmering frozen petals in the air He who dares to pick one makes no imprint in the holy snow. ©2010.10. -NOTICE- I would love it if Soupers could give me some critical feedback. I don't even mind very very strong critiques as long as they're constructive. I'm always encouraged by all the positive comments you all give me, but I think it's time to upgrade my writing skills. ;) So come on and take my poem to pieces, people! :D

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Date: 11/20/2017 4:06:00 PM
Yeah I don't know how to critique something so good, I enjoy your pieces and they are all you so keep doing what you do how you do it, I enjoy it all.
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:45:00 PM
I like the winter poem
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Date: 10/26/2010 11:24:00 AM
Grace how do one critique something you like? I love this piece ;) thanks for your comment today ;)
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:45:00 AM
it is great to me!! LOVE it!
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