Winter Pledge

A beautiful white blanket covers the vast 
expanse...
Flakes mingle with the wind and they 
begin to dance.

The sun plays hide and seek, behind the 
wintry sky.
Autumn bows out, signaling a taunting 
goodbye...
 
The night beckons, as the day draws to a 
close...
Pledging a secret promise, of a wintry  
tomorrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hickman Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 10:07 PM
am amazing rhyme written within that flows very well along with pictures I vision from your words,,Sorry it has taken so long to return but Thank you for your words left behind after reading mine,,,Blessings..cecil
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 10:51 AM
Nice one, Erin!
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 12:07 PM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Erin. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 4:14 AM
Nicely done couplet. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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