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Winter Pleasures

The trees are bare, now comes cold air The breezes howl this night I’m toasty warm, secured by charm As we hold each other tight This winter evening… As the sun descends… The moon is smiling… No love pretends… It’s all for real, dear… As we stay inside… The winter frowns… While in here, we hide… Our winter pleasures… Are year round dreams… When come the fires… With snow filled scenes… We’ll feel the softness… As our hands embrace… Reflecting fires, bright… With red cheeked face… Winter winds chasing, while love’s erasing The many sounds we hear We’re holding so tight, by the fire this night As our bodies stay so near Old mister winter… Turn away from our door… For we won’t answer… We won’t give you more… The room is ignited… By this fire inside… On this winter evening… In here, we’ll hide…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/30/2011 8:01:00 AM
a nice piece of poetry, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:36:00 PM
TAG, U are it!! This is TAGGED as a new FAVORITE! Well-scribed! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/20/2011 3:00:00 AM
I hardly give 7's...but well deserved! Bravo=0) Great write! If you like couplets...see my poems.
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Date: 9/19/2010 7:08:00 AM
mike where ya been hope all is well if gone for good spread those wings and fly my friend even missed your birthday again this year we did hold candlelight for ya here at soup least me did since we so close in birthdays exceptional write and glad I got to catch it hope ya return one day hugs also thanks for all your kindest comments on my works
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Date: 8/25/2010 8:16:00 AM
Ran across your name today and what a delight to read this poem again. Your talent shines through your words. I hope you are continuing your writing. Best wishes to you. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 7/23/2010 3:01:00 PM
Very passionate and romantic write that is descriptive and expressive of emotion..Sara
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:38:00 PM
Hi Micheal I guess I missed a few posts. Nice to see some of your writes here on the soup. In winter it seems all you want to do is stay warm and hide. Take care. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:52:00 AM
Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3
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Date: 6/6/2010 2:44:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification. Missed you here at The Soup. I hope you will be returning soon. Karen
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Date: 2/10/2010 8:31:00 AM
I love the simplicity of the words in this poetic piece. The rhymes are fabulous. This is the type of poetry I can read all day long. Why? Because it's relaxing and not boring. You've desribed to a "tee" as to how I feel about winter and sharing the warmth and coziness with the one I truly love. Thank you for brightening my day. Peace to you, sir. Milt
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Date: 2/7/2010 10:25:00 PM
Michael I see you are still melting hearts, wonderfully written piece my friend, God Bless, mj
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Date: 2/5/2010 5:06:00 PM
What an absolutely beautiful piece you present here for us to read Michael. It is always wonderful to see a post by you. Love, Carol
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