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Winter Opals

Shattered opals flash
colored prisms aground.
Iridescent light
twinkles a rich cache
atop snow's lush white.

Deep hefty snow
captivates me.
Thick cream blanket
charms earth with glee.  

Shining sun,
sitting low,
prime pose shows

Winter
Opals

Glow.

Copyright © CayCay Jennings | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/2/2016 7:01:00 PM ha, I am looking and looking for a poem of yours to comment to. Got back to this one and saw your sweet reply to my comment. You know I never see those replies, don't you? hahha. *unless I happen on them like today!! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 1/3/2016 9:35:00 PM So there is no use in me talking to you now in this box? That's what I thought, I'm writing to myself .... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/6/2015 7:22:00 PM Hey, big congrats here!! by the way, my middle name is made from the last three letters of my first name. Talk about redundant! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/6/2015 7:28:00 PM And from that moment, baby Andrea was destined to be a poet! Love it ... CayCay

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 12/6/2015 6:06:00 AM this is an accomplished rendering of the form, with some beautiful imagery - no surprise to see it was a winner in the contest...thanks for your comment on my 'fallen' poem :) Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 11/20/2015 3:41:00 PM Very well done with the form and your words, congrats on your winning write. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/1/2015 7:37:00 PM Thank you very much, Casarah. All the best to you ... CayCay

Paul Callus Date: 11/20/2015 9:26:00 AM A poem that delights through its imagery, CayCay. It too glows like your winter opals:) Congrats on this fine win! Regards // paul Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/1/2015 7:37:00 PM Thank you so much, Paul .... CayCay

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/20/2015 12:42:00 AM Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write Caycay! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/1/2015 7:38:00 PM Thank you so much, Upma, I am delighted that you like the poem ... CayCay

Skat A Date: 11/19/2015 8:17:00 PM CayCay, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT** Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/1/2015 7:39:00 PM Oh, yes - those winter poems on these winter days - hunker down! Thank you, Skat ... CayCay

Michael Tor Date: 11/19/2015 6:11:00 PM Wonderful write and win CayCay! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/1/2015 7:40:00 PM Double thank you, my friend! Miss you ... CayCay

Michael Tor Date: 11/19/2015 6:10:00 PM Wonderful write and win CayCay! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2015 1:39:00 PM dropping back with my congrats and thanks for inspiring ME to try this form:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/1/2015 7:42:00 PM Thank you, Jan. I'm excited to go back and catch up with your poems, see what your muse has done lately. So much here to do, Jan! All the best ... CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/15/2015 12:23:00 AM This is unique and filled with winter blessings that tantalize the eyes CayCay! Excellent form for this contest! #7 Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/15/2015 11:39:00 AM So, the poem worked!! 'Twas eyes I wanted to tantalize - so much for sharing your reaction, Connie - I do appreciate it very much ... CayCay

Miraj Raha Date: 11/14/2015 12:18:00 PM A wonderful winter poem Cay,best luck in the contest. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/15/2015 11:41:00 AM Miraj - You are here! I have missed your face. Thank you for sharing your reaction ... CayCay

Kim Merryman Date: 11/14/2015 11:45:00 AM Beautiful winter imagery, CayCay! I've only written one diminished hexaverse. I'll have to try another. Love, Kim Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/15/2015 11:45:00 AM Hi, Kim - I am glad you commented and must share that I had fun with this form and do encourage you to write another Dem Hex. Thank you for the compliment. Blessings ... CayCay (let me know when you write it - soup mail)

Emile Pinet Date: 11/14/2015 10:17:00 AM An inspiring glimpse at the wonder and beauty of snow in both grandiose and minute observations. Beautiful! Emile. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/15/2015 11:46:00 AM Hey, talented one - thank you so much for your poetic comments ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/14/2015 10:11:00 AM what a wonderful way to do your winter poem, dear. Soupmail! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/15/2015 11:46:00 AM Thank you, dear one ... CayCay

Jan Allison Date: 11/14/2015 8:39:00 AM Absolutely beautiful CayCay I have only written this form once - I am going to have to write another - you have inspired me:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/14/2015 8:44:00 AM My muse has been misbehaving recently so I am so glad you inspired me:-) Just need to think of a theme now:-) hugs jan xx CayCay Jennings Date: 11/14/2015 8:42:00 AM I got to be your muse - how cool is that? Thank you for the 'b' word - it is pleasing to read 'beautiful' and I thank you, Jan ... CayCay