CayCay Godwin Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Winter Opals

Shattered opals flash
colored prisms aground.
Iridescent light
twinkles a rich cache
atop snow's lush white.

Deep hefty snow
captivates me.
Thick cream blanket
charms earth with glee.  

Shining sun,
sitting low,
prime pose shows

Winter
Opals

Glow.

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Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2016 at 7:01 PM ha, I am looking and looking for a poem of yours to comment to. Got back to this one and saw your sweet reply to my comment. You know I never see those replies, don't you? hahha. *unless I happen on them like today!! CayCay Godwin January 3, 2016 at 9:35 PM So there is no use in me talking to you now in this box? That's what I thought, I'm writing to myself .... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich December 6, 2015 at 7:22 PM Hey, big congrats here!! by the way, my middle name is made from the last three letters of my first name. Talk about redundant! CayCay Godwin December 6, 2015 at 7:28 PM And from that moment, baby Andrea was destined to be a poet! Love it ... CayCay

Charlotte Jade Puddifoot December 6, 2015 at 6:06 AM this is an accomplished rendering of the form, with some beautiful imagery - no surprise to see it was a winner in the contest...thanks for your comment on my 'fallen' poem :)

Casarah Nance November 20, 2015 at 3:41 PM Very well done with the form and your words, congrats on your winning write. CayCay Godwin December 1, 2015 at 7:37 PM Thank you very much, Casarah. All the best to you ... CayCay

Paul Callus November 20, 2015 at 9:26 AM A poem that delights through its imagery, CayCay. It too glows like your winter opals:) Congrats on this fine win! Regards // paul CayCay Godwin December 1, 2015 at 7:37 PM Thank you so much, Paul .... CayCay

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 20, 2015 at 12:42 AM Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write Caycay! CayCay Godwin December 1, 2015 at 7:38 PM Thank you so much, Upma, I am delighted that you like the poem ... CayCay

Skat A November 19, 2015 at 8:17 PM CayCay, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT** CayCay Godwin December 1, 2015 at 7:39 PM Oh, yes - those winter poems on these winter days - hunker down! Thank you, Skat ... CayCay

Michael Tor November 19, 2015 at 6:11 PM Wonderful write and win CayCay! CayCay Godwin December 1, 2015 at 7:40 PM Double thank you, my friend! Miss you ... CayCay

Michael Tor November 19, 2015 at 6:10 PM Wonderful write and win CayCay!

Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 1:39 PM dropping back with my congrats and thanks for inspiring ME to try this form:-) hugs Jan xx CayCay Godwin December 1, 2015 at 7:42 PM Thank you, Jan. I'm excited to go back and catch up with your poems, see what your muse has done lately. So much here to do, Jan! All the best ... CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong November 15, 2015 at 12:23 AM This is unique and filled with winter blessings that tantalize the eyes CayCay! Excellent form for this contest! #7 CayCay Godwin November 15, 2015 at 11:39 AM So, the poem worked!! 'Twas eyes I wanted to tantalize - so much for sharing your reaction, Connie - I do appreciate it very much ... CayCay

Miraj Raha November 14, 2015 at 12:18 PM A wonderful winter poem Cay,best luck in the contest. CayCay Godwin November 15, 2015 at 11:41 AM Miraj - You are here! I have missed your face. Thank you for sharing your reaction ... CayCay

Kim Merryman November 14, 2015 at 11:45 AM Beautiful winter imagery, CayCay! I've only written one diminished hexaverse. I'll have to try another. Love, Kim CayCay Godwin November 15, 2015 at 11:45 AM Hi, Kim - I am glad you commented and must share that I had fun with this form and do encourage you to write another Dem Hex. Thank you for the compliment. Blessings ... CayCay (let me know when you write it - soup mail)

Emile Pinet November 14, 2015 at 10:17 AM An inspiring glimpse at the wonder and beauty of snow in both grandiose and minute observations. Beautiful! Emile. CayCay Godwin November 15, 2015 at 11:46 AM Hey, talented one - thank you so much for your poetic comments ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2015 at 10:11 AM what a wonderful way to do your winter poem, dear. Soupmail! CayCay Godwin November 15, 2015 at 11:46 AM Thank you, dear one ... CayCay

Jan Allison November 14, 2015 at 8:39 AM Absolutely beautiful CayCay I have only written this form once - I am going to have to write another - you have inspired me:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Jan Allison November 14, 2015 at 8:44 AM My muse has been misbehaving recently so I am so glad you inspired me:-) Just need to think of a theme now:-) hugs jan xx CayCay Godwin November 14, 2015 at 8:42 AM I got to be your muse - how cool is that? Thank you for the 'b' word - it is pleasing to read 'beautiful' and I thank you, Jan ... CayCay